My Inglish Sucks - 2 ... [english Skills; Humor? ; Beware The Words! ; Short; Sequel To "My English Sucks.." ]] Poem by Bri Edwards

My Inglish Sucks - 2 ... [english Skills; Humor? ; Beware The Words! ; Short; Sequel To "My English Sucks.." ]]

Rating: 4.3


my inglish sucks thats for shur
eech day in english class was a blure
nowns an vurbs ….what are they
Id rather sooner go out side an play.

It dont mater now a corse
they evun let me in US AIRFORCE
were I cooked for all the guys ………….
an no one askd inglish weres or wise.

Its tough thow ……some time
like wen my kids want me too read
but pichers help me figger most the
words to his an her nersry rhime.



(septambr 28 2014)

Sunday, September 28, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: language,learning
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i have a poem 'My English Sucks' on PH.my PH friend Kanav Justa 'suggested' i write a sequel. he wasn't paying much, so i took my sweet time.but now, weeks later, after a few minutes of intensive concentration...........here is my sequel.bri:)

thanks kanav, for bugging me.

p.s.i counted 'roughly' 40 inglesh errors in my sequel.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Xelam Kan™ 30 September 2014

not that much what we would expect, plz don't divorce your own style, we all know HUMOR is your domain, but that must be striking and weird, not too much predicable like this... seems that i have written it, lolz

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 02 October 2014

LMAO! ! ! hehehe...well, hi BRi! :) after a long long long long time I'm here again! ! ohhh, ye....as I'm an English literature student now, i can make connection with your liens above..hehe........it released my niceness. :)

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Fantastic sequel. Equally hilarious. I don't understand how I missed both these! Enjoyed and enjoyed.. thank you for directing me to them….

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Bri Edwards 14 June 2018

Valentin, you Russians are killin' me, ..........but not as much as you (maybe) used to WANT TO DO to us Americans [please stand for God Save America]. you left words off the ends of two lines. the words, i'm sure you'll agree, are and. please! NO SELF-CENSORING! ! leave that to PH, the KGB, or the CIA. thanks. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 17 June 2018

this is a Reply to Valentin's comment (below) . PH did not supply a Reply box for his comment! OH! it is not a poem comment, but a reply he made to MY poem comment. now i'm getting confused! ! ! maybe the problem is that i have another poem entitled My English Sucks! ! ! ? ? ? V, God Save the WORLD! ! ;) i have NO 'My Inglish Sucks - 3' OR 'My Inglish Sucks - 1'! ! ! bri :)

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Valentin Savin 15 June 2018

God Save America. I'm not a killer. Brian, I've explained you personally (in a private message) that I put this comment in the wrong place quite unintentionally. It was meant for your Inglish Sucks - 3. Please excuse my misinterpreting. I tried to follow you in my comment to that poem. By the way, can you send me your Inglish Sucks -1 if any. I'm interested in that kind of English. I use some of the Russian Language Sucks here in my country. Thanks in advance Val

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Big Shaq 13 June 2018

Ur an idiot m8 lolol l ol ol o lo l ol o lo l ol o l l l ll l l l l l l l l ll l l l l l l ll

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Bri Edwards 16 June 2018

yes, i'm an idiot, and................YOU SUCK! ! ! ha ha. :)

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 02 October 2014

Beautiful poem composed in suitable way with series of connected lines. Beautifully penned.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 02 October 2014

LMAO! ! ! hehehe...well, hi BRi! :) after a long long long long time I'm here again! ! ohhh, ye....as I'm an English literature student now, i can make connection with your liens above..hehe........it released my niceness. :)

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