My Life Parts........ [short; Silly; Inspired By Lynn Petty's Poem 'a Strong Weaving'] Poem by Bri Edwards

My Life Parts........ [short; Silly; Inspired By Lynn Petty's Poem 'a Strong Weaving']



My life parts are from a junk yard.
That's why some are particularly hard.
But they're stuck together with spittle...
from former quarterback Y. A. Tittle,
so each day i advance.....an additional yard.

Thursday, January 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
my first poem submited after being 'away' for a month. bri :)

this was part of a comment i left for Lynn, who had been 'away' for about five years! welcome back, Lynn Petty.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 05 February 2016

'Stuck together by spittle'......! Jesus cured the blind man of Bethseiba with mud mixed with spittle! ! Why don't you apply some spittle on your eyes to give them better vision!

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