Mortgaged Poem by Nikunj Sharma

To increase the quality of life and to have more comforts, sometime we have to go for mortgaged loans. Now Credit Card is a better name for mortgage available in every pocket oflate. A well composed poem.

Excellent write, very much related to the present situation many people are finding themselves in. Heart is the only thing which is not mortgaged, or maybe we can't be sure of that too.........Nice 10

mortgage? loans? money? ........they are only an accessory of human's life...

On the button poem of the currant time pulled out of the bag great theme true to whats happening now well done with the insight ++++++10 regards

Very creative! You did well to combine what you know with how you feel. Words chosen to create the fabric of which you sew, to style a perfect fit. A poem of style and color to be worn by many. Read and wear! You are exercising your talent to produce entertainment. I enjoyed this. :) DC

So sad, but so many people caught in this spider's web. A world of suffering, and worse still, the perpetuators of the scheme have walked away with millions instead of jail time. I haven't been into a store in months...just trying to get through the month (and I have a set rate mortgage) . Everyone around me is either losing their house, or losing their job. That's why I wrote my poem Mortgaged. You and I are definitely exploring the same economic territory. Val

very good poem to learn about gateways to economy in different fields of life..........

Very good poem. Very much related to the present situation too. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it 10+

Quite today's world with banking ideas spreading fast...promises to fulfil our dreams bringing with it more than just our dreams! .... Winnie

wonderful simile: ''Sold out to a pin striped suit, gullible as an innocent child, dreaming a candy rainbow'' wonderful poem, lovely to read...........10+++++++