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' Miss ', I really miss#(in 500)
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Miss, you can’t be so rude,
For a word you nave made prelude,
All warmth and affection you include,
Hate and distance you always exclude,
I never expect you to cast,
All doubts but trust not last,
you were the first to realize it fast
Reality known but never wore mast,
Your innocence and name infused,
Kind words but you never confused,
Time for decision but you never refused
Always at right point and crisis defused,
Even amidst delicate moments,
Not a word or offered comments,
Hurt you most but you used simple word,
Is it blessings or gift from Lord?
Loved you most as your dearest friend,
Still you didn’t put any word to end,
Kept me at dark but did not ask for excuse
Used it as pretext but not denied or refuse
'Miss' I miss you but you don’t miss,
Not expected kind hug or simple kiss
Not even kind gesture or more to show,
Still I miss as you never beat brow,
Will this uncertainty remain or go?
Life full of remorse but still forgo,
Is there any restriction from your side or embargo?
You bear always “no entry” logo,
You called on me for good luck and best wishes
I remained dead as no water for fish,
May be it is very hard for some reasons
Why then draught without any season?
I was quick to grasp situation,
Avoided unwarranted efforts for persuasion,
Shock was sudden and heavy but came very late,
I did accept it with grace as part of fate
hasmukh amathalal
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naphright naphright
(11/23/2009 6:11:00 AM) |
am i getting this right. there are 2 views going on, at first i thought i want to be like her then some parts were to the negative. i better read it again.
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Ken E Hall
(11/22/2009 6:26:00 PM) |
Love can be such puzzel but it's downfall can be seen on the wall, epic poem
that flows thru a loving path of holding up face very well penned+++10
regards
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Monica Rose
(11/19/2009 7:59:00 PM) |
This is beautiful you have a talent for poetry. Nicely written and formatted.
~Monica Rose
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Obed Dela Cruz
(11/7/2009 11:46:00 PM) |
I have seen this many times before but it's still good.
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Tj Minchew
(11/7/2009 8:23:00 PM) |
Seems like me and you have rode in the same boat before my friend. wonderfully written.10+
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Chand Shikari
(11/7/2009 7:26:00 PM) |
never expect you to cast,
All doubts but trust not last,
you were the first to realize it fast
Reality known but never wore mast,
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Natasha Rathod
(11/7/2009 7:16:00 PM) |
Miss, you can’t be so rude,
For a word you nave made prelude,
All warmth and affection you include, /////////////////beautifully worded poem..fine piece......10
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Jigar Mehta
(11/6/2009 4:57:00 AM) |
its a very nice poem...
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