Treasure Island

adam reed


Miranda Elizabeth Stoltz


she's amazing
its a thrill when she speaks
the fire inside blazing
my joy at its peak

beautiful yet modest
a sweet heart who's independent
i would compare her to a goddess
like athena... but different

when she talks i listen
eager to hear her every word
i can tell when she feels distant
i feel it when she's hurt

love isnt enough to describe
how i feel inside
she constantly makes me smile
this girl makes my everyday worth while

sleeps inevitable but she is my last thought
dreaming about her is indescribable
my only comfort in waking is that we will soon talk

we are apart now but i will think about you until...
i love you so much baby. and i always will

Submitted: Friday, March 11, 2011
Edited: Saturday, May 14, 2011

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  • Chrishtiana *life To Short To Waist * Reed (8/26/2011 2:27:00 PM)

    this poem is beautiful, the woman you speak of is real lucky to have someone that truely loves her. it is amazing to see that ven though you are apart you dont fall into the temptation of another woman, you stay loyal and faithful to this girl. it is harde yes i know, but keep it up. now days we dont see a love that is so real like this, dont turn on it. just amazing great poem! its jusy so unbeleavable.! ! ! ! ! ! :) i gave this poem a ten, work like this deserves it. (Report) Reply

  • Makayla Straight (5/14/2011 9:01:00 AM)

    Wow... Im speechless... (which seems impossible most of the time)
    Anyways this is a amazing poem. You comment on my poems that deal with heart breaking. But when I read this poem it does not seem like you have had your heart broken. It seems its a whole and because of that Congrats... Thank you for sharing this amazingly beautiful poem., ,10+++ (Report) Reply

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