Love On A Limb & Elsewhere, Etcetera: Lovemaking Of Birds & Humans... [ And It Is All True! ! ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Love On A Limb & Elsewhere, Etcetera: Lovemaking Of Birds & Humans... [ And It Is All True! ! ]

Rating: 5.0


BIRDS:

The female robin sat with wings aflutter,
chirping.A chirping like a birdie's stutter.
A male hopped upon her back, a bold male,
and she offered him her fine, uplifted tail.

[[Bird lovemaking is comical, at least to me,
…when I see it done on window sill or tree,
…. or ANYWHERE, I guess, for that matter.]]
When ducks ‘do it' on water they do splatter.
And while the female tries hard NOT to drown,
her mate tries hard to not slip & fall...down.


HUMANS:

"Guys" may use a frontal or rear approach;
it took my brain years, this issue, to broach.
[[As a kid I saw dogs do it from rear.So true!
It took years before I tried.By then I knew.]]

I forgot to mention quacking done by 'the ducks',
as the male pins down female, and he f—ks...her.
Humans, too, may ‘chirp softly' OR ‘quack aloud',
OR stifle sounds, ....like voices aren't allowed!

As for WHERE human lovemaking is sometimes done:
....it's done LOTS of places.Never 'on the run'? ?
It's done on bed, in (some)cars, & on back lawn;
for humans, in love, no limits may, by them, be drawn!



(September …22nd …2019)

Tuesday, September 24, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: birds,love,lust,sex
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this as a 'love poem' to offer Dr. 'Fab' for his upcoming anthology about love.perhaps he rightfully rejected it; he DID say it is funny. I'm not sure if i meant it to be!He said he was looking
for poems about love between humans (not lovemaking NOR birds! !) .

But ain't lovemaking part of loving someone, sometimes? ? ?ok, NOT all the time.

So, now it shall linger on PH till someone finds it and decides to
reject it or to embrace it.

bri

:)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Crayon Poet 29 September 2019

'You may use a frontal or rear approach.' haha I left them both back on Earth, someplace.

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 September 2019

" Guys" may use a frontal or rear approach; .. You say. Yours is too frontal an approach, courageous I must say.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 September 2019

This poem is an excellent poem very well penned. The female robin sat with wings aflutter and did chirping. Robin bird is very sweet and beautiful....10

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James Mclain 24 September 2019

At least your not a missionary, preaching the gospel. L.O.L. James McLain

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