Luck For Me.... [inspired By Loke Kok Yee; Short; Luck; Food] Poem by Bri Edwards

Luck For Me.... [inspired By Loke Kok Yee; Short; Luck; Food]

Rating: 4.8


more luck some of us could use right now.
for instance i'd like to find (in backyard) a cow...
which i could then milk each morningtide.....
to have milk for cereal with o.j. on the side!

but then i'd need more luck to grow a tree,
so i'd always have fresh oranges for 'free' ….
in order to squeeze for their sweet juice.
AND for x-mas luck i could find.....a fat goose! !

Monday, November 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: luck
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
my PH friend, Loke Kok Yee, suggested luck can come in handy. this poem is part of my response to his message. thanks, bro. :) bri
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jak Black 13 November 2015

Where do you get your inspiration from, Bri? The fridge? Another witty write, of course on one of your favourite subjects. If you hadn't have been a postal worker I'm sure you'd have made a fist of farming. Ha ha.

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Lyn Paul 11 November 2015

May luck be with us all. Positivity brings luck! Lovely to see a pic of your beautiful wife and thanks for keeping us up to date Bri with comps,

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Loke Kok Yee 10 November 2015

By luck I do not mean milk or a cow luck is when things happen your way somehow and if you decide to grow a tree a banana tree will grow easier you see X'mas is still far far away get some chips or you'll starve today thanks Bri-10++

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Billy Loving 09 November 2015

nicely done - I enjoyed this poem

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