In My World Poem by Cassandra Jasmine

In My World

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In My world,
Poverty shan't exist in our world.
Everybody would be treated with equality,
Yet hard work would always be present.

In My world,
People would be judged by what they could do,
Not by their color, religion, or age,
Nor by their gender, beliefs or looks.

In My world,
Technology may not be so abundant as today,
But the lush green valleys and Nature's way,
Shall never perish, nor shall it die away.

In My world,
Animals would know caution and fear,
But death wouldn't be so cruel, and tragic.
Nor shall any animal be shunned upon.

In My world,
Wars would be but a nightmare,
Dictators would just be a legend,
And love would not be a fantasy.

But what is My world?
It doesn't exist, nor shall it ever occur.
Yet one can dream a million miles,
So, I say, let them dream.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Many people wish for this and that. Everyone does.
You could be stripped of all your possessions, but never your imagination. If one were to dream, who is to stop them?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alookh (matin) 22 September 2013

WOoooooooooooow! ....Cassandra? ! ! ! ! ....u did write a poem....this one is unique! really particular dear! im gonna add it to my fave poem list....a perfect piece....that i can find no problem in it....really CHEER! ! ! ! ! ; D

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Abhishek Mishra 23 September 2013

Your world is ideal.very inspiring poem...awesome lines....

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Khairul Ahsan 25 September 2013

Oh how wonderful a poem this is! You have painted a sweet world, ideal for the humankind. The last stanza is simply superb, priceless! 'But what is My world? It doesn't exist, nor shall it ever occur. Yet one can dream a million miles, So, I say, let them dream.' I love to dream!

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Khairul Ahsan 25 September 2013

And thanks for the wise and beautiful note. 'You could be stripped of all your possessions, but never your imagination. If one were to dream, who is to stop them? ' Simply loved it!

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Sandra Feldman 25 September 2013

Yes one can dream of a better world, And fight and scream, until you're heard. You're beautiful, idealistic poem makes us conscious of how imperfect our society is and how much there is yet to do.They even want to take away, the little positive we have today.

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Rajesh Thankappan 03 March 2015

Though some of our ideas may sound a bit Utopian yet we can realize some of them. Enjoyed it.

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Mj Lemon 27 February 2015

Yes we all can, probably should, dream. Amazing poem. Just awesome.

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Secretly Unknown 25 February 2015

Dreams... I love your dreams, dreams that rarely are dreamt now a days. Children dream for video games, a new computer. But you dreams are 10/10. :)

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Ethan Ying 25 September 2013

Beautiful, Cassandra, just beautiful! I totally love the note too. Plus, I like the last stanza: But what is My world? It doesn't exist, nor shall it ever occur. Yet one can dream a million miles, So, I say, let them dream. I LOVE dreaming. Good job, girl!

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Sandra Feldman 25 September 2013

What beautiful thoughts What beautiful feeling Your world certainly is , More than appealing S F

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