Noah Body


In A Land Of Darkness Am I Lost - Poem by Noah Body

In a land of black darkness am I lost
I want out of this land no matter the cost

I'm tired of tears burning down my face
Of the thoughts setting my heart to race

Thoughts of death, of peace at last
It's set in stone, the die is cast

The emptiness that eats me alive
Is buried way down deep inside

It sucks up my soul and spits it out
The pain of it makes me shout

On the wind my cries are blown
No one to hear, away they've flown

Still in my head the echoes ring
But of love and joy I'll never sing

For no heart is inside of me
Just a hole like you'll never see

With death I have a date ahead of me
A date from which I cannot flee

Not at all do I worry over my fate
Peace at last, I just can't wait


Comments about In A Land Of Darkness Am I Lost by Noah Body

  • Bronze Star - 2,051 Points Bernard Snyder (12/20/2014 12:07:00 PM)

    Death is inevitable. Nice poem! Also congrats'! Well- deserved 'poem of the day! . (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 29,399 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (12/20/2014 8:54:00 AM)

    Death will come its own course and not be disturbed the mind in distressed thoughts. A great writing here. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,437 Points Lyn Paul (12/20/2014 3:34:00 AM)

    For those of us who have no understanding of this darkness.
    I thank you.
    Hey congratulations on poem of the day 3rd year in a row. Cheers (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,899 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (12/20/2014 1:59:00 AM)

    For no heart is inside of me
    Just a hole like you'll never see

    Heart-less creature making poem with rhyme....I can't imagine, never will try to imagine even if in dream I get opportunity to stay my rest of days finally. The poet who doesn't want to love or to sing in joy.....yet composing poetry. So contrast sounds. Actually ...pain is the God to our senses....it proves again. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 91 Points Steve Ricketts (12/20/2013 4:55:00 PM)

    What a lovely piece of work, I enjoyed this poem enormously, I think it's a first class read, thanks for sharing it with us all.

    Steve. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 940 Points Leslie Philibert (12/20/2013 10:01:00 AM)

    Liked this too, the couplet structure, ....and death is not to be scared of... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,437 Points Lyn Paul (12/20/2013 8:50:00 AM)

    Wonderful to have your words for poem of the day, I read this 12 months ago and it moved me just as it has done again today. I thank you Tony and I wish you pure health and happiness. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,311 Points * Sunprincess * (12/20/2013 3:16:00 AM)

    .....our God is perfect...he created everything you see for
    your enjoyment...so don't waste your time start enjoying
    as soon as possible... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 155 Points Jayne Davies (12/20/2013 1:48:00 AM)

    Good poem! Well done! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,757 Points Godfrey Morris (12/20/2012 6:29:00 PM)

    lovely, great work. i like the gloom in this poem. i too hve some gloomy poems. I invite you to read my poems and comment (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,253 Points Unwritten Soul (12/11/2012 9:49:00 AM)

    You reveal all out, we have life and life is to be ended anyway someday, like you me too...A chance of life we should thankful to God for this, we may live in emptiness but see this in new way, it is a space that we can still able to fill up....we got a choice and let make it best for all of us, our life...second to life minutes to craft history before hours gone but forever we will be remembered, your soul created for a mission, while in emptiness decorate the empty part with things that you like_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,437 Points Lyn Paul (12/10/2012 6:01:00 AM)

    great work; yet never forget that one day you will find the light. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 10, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, December 10, 2012


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