Persian Nightingale


I Wish You Enough! - Poem by Persian Nightingale

I wish you enough sun to keep you bright
No matter how dark is your night

I wish you enough rain to fall you in love
No need the passionate plea of above

I wish you enough joy to keep you alive
No matter how toughly you survive

I wish you enough gain to satisfy your desire
No need to ask to require

I wish you enough pain to make you awake
No matter how painful is your ache

I wish you enough loss to remind you of your own
No need to groan or moan

I wish you enough hellos to light your eye
No matter how heavy is the final bye

(2008/10/24)


Comments about I Wish You Enough! by Persian Nightingale

  • Gold Star - 6,810 Points Mihaela Pirjol (7/18/2014 5:51:00 AM)

    Great poem...I love the last two verses...such an emotional write.Beautiful! Thank you. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Shabre Moore (1/21/2009 1:02:00 PM)

    i really do love it no lie its jus......... i can't really explain it though but its jus beautiful really i love it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 27 Points Fiona Davidson (11/1/2008 2:41:00 PM)

    Lovely heartfelt piece... thank you... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 9 Points Linda Winchell (11/1/2008 2:11:00 PM)

    I wish you enough of more poems you write
    I wish them to share with others of us on this site!
    Great write! God Bless, Linda (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pure Remedy (11/1/2008 3:17:00 AM)

    your a lil romeo! . i love your work.. so gentle... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (10/27/2008 7:32:00 AM)

    nice wishes for everyone.......well penned (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Riquetta Elliott (10/26/2008 10:12:00 PM)

    This is very amazing poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Elena Winters (10/26/2008 12:38:00 AM)

    i wish you the best
    because you should be making money for talent like yours
    amazing poem! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie *Trusting You* (10/25/2008 11:42:00 PM)

    I love the last 2 lines
    great job
    *Purkey Girl* (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,613 Points Seema Chowdhury (10/25/2008 11:36:00 PM)

    A lovel prayer poem. it shows your tender heart and good wishes for the loved ones. Hope it all comes true. Good Luck! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ershad Mazumder (10/24/2008 9:29:00 PM)

    Very good dear PN. I like your poems more than mine. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points ♥ Brie {And Eric} ♥ (10/24/2008 12:41:00 PM)

    Very well said and thought out.
    very nice rhymes too.
    This one is my favorite of them all.
    -Brie (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (10/24/2008 11:54:00 AM)

    You are very generous with your lovely, positive thoughts.
    I like your rhymes. Ten for you.

    Kindest regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,723 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (10/24/2008 11:42:00 AM)

    Making wishes and wanting the best for anyone you love brings untold blessings upon oneself-it's a karma thing.Lovely uplifting poem.I gave you a ten. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 168 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (10/24/2008 11:09:00 AM)

    Honest love for other....very well composed.........10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Thad Wilk (10/24/2008 9:59:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem and greeting to start ones day, eloquent - i would say!
    Best wishes! *10*
    Friend Thad (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tsira Goge (10/24/2008 9:40:00 AM)

    Your clever desire forces the favourite person to remain beautiful, sensitive, clever and wished... 10.....
    Best wishes,
    Tsira (Report) Reply

  • Rookie M M (10/24/2008 9:06:00 AM)

    You managed to encapture life and its aim in a very lovely greeting poem, which means a lot to all humans. Well done! 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Anjali Sinha (10/24/2008 7:50:00 AM)

    How beautiful! ! ! !
    The many wishes--
    I wish someone says them to me! ! ! ! ! LOL
    +++10 as always
    anju (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lynda Robson (10/24/2008 7:39:00 AM)

    What a lovely, touching poem. Who could wish for more, you are a very wise man,

    10

    Lynda xxx (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 24, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, December 5, 2008


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