Marvin Brato Sr

Rookie - 122 Points (March 2,1960 / Davao City, Philippines)

Hw (Http: //Www.Poemhunter.Com/Contest-Vote/Health-Is-Wealth-3/) - Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

Life is simple
just like the wind
though can't be seen
yet animate as spirit

Life is short
don't cut it shorter
by indulging abuse
in careless lifestyle

Life can die
if we neglect it
engage in balance
for health is wealth


Comments about Hw (Http: //Www.Poemhunter.Com/Contest-Vote/Health-Is-Wealth-3/) by Marvin Brato Sr

  • Gold Star - 7,824 Points Khairul Ahsan (10/22/2013 9:51:00 AM)

    Short and succinct, thanks for the advice. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 6,547 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (10/10/2013 8:14:00 PM)

    engage in balance
    for health is wealth
    Beautiful poem with a nice message. All the best in the contest. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (10/10/2013 1:23:00 PM)

    Life is simple and shot. True. So is your poem: simple, sweet and short. Best of Luck. Voted. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (10/10/2013 1:20:00 PM)

    Lfie is simple and short. Poem is simple, sweet and short. Best of Luck. Voted. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (10/10/2013 10:10:00 AM)

    True Lord love Balance whole universe is balanced one nice thank you sir (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (10/10/2013 5:41:00 AM)

    The simple choices we can make effect greatly our lives. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 10, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 10, 2013


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