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She went.
Because I wanted her to go.
Wanted her to go being hurt.
For hurting her I plotted the show
Just alike a smart director would do.
She went.
She came, as used to come as friend.
But either God or Devil played in my mind.
I wished her to go and not to come back again
For I knew, a new life I was about to begin.
She went.
I knew she would come to stay this time.
She would come to gift me my heart back.
She knew I longed so long for it so cared
She came to heal but returned her eyes blurred.
She went.
She came unaware of the fact going wrong.
She didn't know when I got changed.
She came with her smile as she would come.
Not aware that I decided her to dump.
She went.
As friend she came to meet me but you see
I received her as honourable guest.
so courteous I never used to be.
As perfect host I served her food and tea.
She went.
Before going she tried to find me in me
hiding behind the mask, not seen.
behaving like a stranger to a friend
very well could I enact till the end.
She went.
Her smiling face had gloomed before she went
I knew I could make it get her trapped
in thoughts that would not let her feel
Back to see what made me make such deal.
She went.
Not having my heart returned to me.
Knowing but it lost it's worth be born,
somewhere she might have thrown it away.
Since then Heartless I'm happy going in my way.
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Palas Kumar Ray
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Shimon Weinroth (10/30/2008 1:55:00 AM)
I like it better this way!
there are two typographical errors
courteous and received
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Shimon Weinroth (10/29/2008 8:05:00 AM)
love requited and unrequited is often due to our ownselves, the duality of your conscience prevails upon you, because you are too honest to delude yourself,
so very well presented the poem leves a lasting echo,10
still I have difficulty with your using go as a noun without the English form of the infinitve or gerund, when Aristotle gave us poetic license he meant metaphors
there are so many allied possibilities that you can use, instead the poem sounds like incorrect English though I know what you mean,
cheers
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