Forest Of Gratitude Poem by Aufie Zophy

Forest Of Gratitude

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In the shadow of the tree
of endless grace and amazing mercy,
lies a magic acorn filled with gratitude,
spouting fast into a giant oak of awe,
exploding into a forest of kindness,
filled with wonderful paths colored with love.
Let us all get lost in this forest of gratitude,
leaving behind and never return
to the barren cities of greed.

Wednesday, October 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love,gratitude,kindness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 10 October 2017

Endless grace and amazing mercy of God we still feel in the shadow of the tree. An eternal magic fills mind and we get cheer. Kindness is filled with wonderful paths and these are colored with love. We feel presence of our heavenly father. In this forest of gratitude we should leave attachment and greed and proceed ahead towards eternity. This is Excellent poem.

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Unwritten Soul 10 October 2017

I feel the tenderness, calm in this forest, your planted words of peace dear...loved it

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Chris Embrick 04 October 2017

Too many show no gratitude or kindness today. When it is expressed it is like a breath of fresh air to the soul. Thanks you. Beautifully penned. 10

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Hans Vr 04 October 2017

Many thanks for the lovely comment

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 04 October 2017

Let us all get lost in this forest of gratitude Leaving behind and never return To the barren cities of greed. A beautiful poem shared. A warm welcome to gratitude and bidding farewell to greed. Thanks a lot poet for the sharing. 10+++

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Hans Vr 04 October 2017

Many thanks, for the lovely comment

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