Eve Sees Ed. Ed Seeds Eve. ….. [not ‘'suitable' For Children Under 6; Sex! ; Early ‘mankind'; One-Syllable Poem; Very Short] Poem by Bri Edwards

Eve Sees Ed. Ed Seeds Eve. ….. [not ‘'suitable' For Children Under 6; Sex! ; Early ‘mankind'; One-Syllable Poem; Very Short]

Rating: 5.0


Eve sees Ed.
Eve 'eyes' Ed.
Eve's wet.
Ed's wet.
Ed pets Eve.
Eve pets Ed.
Eve's egg ‘gets set'.
Ed's sperm ‘gets set'.
Ed enters Eve.
Sperm enters egg.

(June 25, 2016; edited March 23, 2017)

Thursday, March 23, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: gardening,sex,short
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
someone on PH, i don't remember who, wrote some poems using just consonants and one of the English vowels. it inspired me.

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after submitting i thought to myself: 'is 'Seeds' in the title appropriate/accurate usage of 'seed'? '

so i Googled 'define seed sperm' and found this:

'Sperm is the male reproductive cell and is derived from the Greek word (σπέρμα) sperma (meaning 'seed') .... Sperm cells cannot divide and have a limited life span, but after fusion with egg cells during fertilization, a new organism begins developing, starting as a totipotent zygote.'

and:

' verb (used with object)
15.
to sow (a field, lawn, etc.) with seed.
16.
to sow or scatter (seed) .
17.
to sow or scatter (clouds) with crystals or particles of silver iodide, solid carbon dioxide, etc., to induce precipitation.
18.
to place, introduce, etc., especially in the hope of increase or profit:
to seed a lake with trout.
19.
to sprinkle on (a surface, substance, etc.) in the manner of seed:
to seed an icy bridge with chemicals.
20.
to remove the seeds from (fruit) .
21.
Sports.

to arrange (the drawings for positions in a tournament) so that ranking players or teams will not meet in the early rounds of play.
to distribute (ranking players or teams) in this manner.'

bri ;)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Douglas Scotney 23 March 2017

I just used 'pet' in a poem Bri: 'What Next? ' And also 'easy'.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 December 2022

Extremely well penned. Thanks for sharing

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Valsa George 07 April 2017

From Creation to Copulation and from Consummation to Conception................ the whole cycle in a few words (though you cannot call it mono syllabic, as 'enter' has two syllables) ....... However Masterful Delivery!

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B.m. Biswas 26 March 2017

I read it and enjoy it..... not so easy to write...... fine.

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Annette Aitken 26 March 2017

Eeeeee laddie I like it......; -)

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Mj Lemon 23 March 2017

The power of just one vowel! Potent poetry, my friend, Potent poetry.

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