Death Of Mankind? ……[extinction Poem For November Showcase; How Shall Mankind End, If It Does? ? ; Musings] Poem by Bri Edwards

Death Of Mankind? ……[extinction Poem For November Showcase; How Shall Mankind End, If It Does? ? ; Musings]

Rating: 5.0


Will Humans die off quickly, or slowly peter out***?
I think the latter; I’ve, of that, little doubt.
I don’t mean individual humans; I mean Mankind.
They’ll peter out till …..not one human soul you’ll find.

Sure, widespread nuclear war could do it more quickly I suppose,
OR “global warming”. [Do you want your body cooked or ‘froze’? ]
A brand new pandemic spread by birds or bugs?
And THEN there'd be no more Moms or Dads giving hugs!

My theory is: “Men (with machines) will merge, …..
[with a few human technicians cloned] until, on the verge of …..
EXTINCTION, machines will then decide Men aren’t the ‘right stuff’,
….which may leave God AND the Devil, BOTH, in a huff*****.”

Friday, November 20, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: future
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
*** “peter out” …..”verb (used without object) , peter out.1. to diminish gradually and stop; dwindle to nothing: The hot water always peters out in the middle of my shower. “

***** “in a huff
Fig. in an angry or offended manner. (*Typically: be ~; get [into] ~.) He heard what we had to say, then left in a huff. She came in a huff and ordered us to bring her something to eat. “

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my musings for the topic i offered for poems in the November showcase on my site. [optional topic]
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 30 November 2015

You have seriously pondered over the topic. Life might end with a 'Bang' as it is believed to have begun in a nuclear war or sudden collision of the stellar bodies or it can end with a 'whimper' through global warming or gradual climatic change! What ever it is, life has to come to an end, may be to have a fresh start..... then Bri may be a different person..... quite serious and sedate with no more interest in ice creams or 'wives', talking philosophy.....and never cracking any jokes! (Just imagine!) A brand new pandemic spread by birds or bugs? And THEN there'd be no more Moms or Dads giving hugs! ..............Love these lines! Altogether a 'decent' poem deserving high marks!

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Akhtar Jawad 21 November 2015

What poets thought yesterday is now before our sight. What Bri thinks today may be before the sights of our descendants.

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Loke Kok Yee 21 November 2015

it will all happen in due time life today is hardly worth a dime thanks Bri

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Eugene Levich 20 November 2015

Alas! I think you may be right. And it will be a horrible sight. When humans are all departed I'll be like life never started. Maybe if people had a brain We wouldn't have to begin again.

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