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Dance of The Rain

Stages of skies open
Its curtains is hope that be woven
Sown by the wind spirits
In the blessing of white expanses
When the skies metamorphosed to be gray
Lightning’s timpani reverberating
The eyes of thunder play
A silver silhouette that stunning
Sun on throne of it
Watched from a distance
Calm and authoritative
Give a sign to begin the event
A dance will be presented
Where the hope will be harvested
In the form of rain
Remove solitude and pain
The fairies play rhythm
About the beautiful songs of autumn
Water arrows race toward to the Earth
Like a mating dance of the paradise birds
Those arrows go down so swift
My body is wringing wet
Dust and dirt leave
Left a smile in my faith

Earthzcity,160813

Submitted: Thursday, August 15, 2013
Edited: Friday, August 16, 2013


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  • Len Webster (1/18/2014 7:22:00 AM)

    This is potentially a first-rate poem but it does need some careful revision. For example, Line 2: Its curtains is hope that be woven..

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  • Len Webster (1/18/2014 7:20:00 AM)

    This is potentially a first-rate poem but it needs some careful adjustment. For example, Line 2: Its curtains is hope...? ? ?

  • Ginga Loven (12/9/2013 9:42:00 AM)

    i love the part about... the faries play rhythm about the beautiful songs of autumn. very inspiring i loved it

  • Susan Lacovara (12/8/2013 4:35:00 PM)

    Refreshingly beautiful write...I could feel the lightness of the rain within your words. I especially like, Water arrows race towards the Earth... I was happy to be caught in the downpour of your lovely poem. I invite you to explore my poetry, as well. PEACE

  • The Fallen Leaves Of Mira (11/27/2013 3:47:00 AM)

    You have a great mind and master the art of expression very well.

  • Yasmeen Khan (10/22/2013 12:18:00 PM)

    A profound poem about Nature and it's beautiful phenomenon, rain

  • marvin brato (10/2/2013 4:33:00 AM)

    Great imaginary inspired by mother nature!

  • Cassandra Jasmine (9/24/2013 9:22:00 PM)

    Interesting, showy, and great! I gave it a 10. :)

  • Vera Sidhwa (9/21/2013 1:51:00 PM)

    That's wonderful when you say calm and authorative, and the imagery in your poem is awesome.
    Your get a ten out of ten.

  • Geetha Jayakumar (9/19/2013 12:15:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem. You have captured rain very well..Enjoyed reading each lines..

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