D N A Soup …. [ Inspired By Denis Mair's ‘poem', "Original Soup Of Life", On P H; Biology Of Cells And Genetics; His Is Very Long; Mine Is Very Short! ; Creationism ] Poem by Bri Edwards

D N A Soup …. [ Inspired By Denis Mair's ‘poem', "Original Soup Of Life", On P H; Biology Of Cells And Genetics; His Is Very Long; Mine Is Very Short! ; Creationism ]

Rating: 5.0


Vegetable is the only soup which, to me, does matter,
and, along with it, bread, which IS baked grain-batter.

I got sucked into this poem by force of my food habit,
thinking Denis spoke of soup: pea, tomato, or even rabbit.

If this is a ploy to get old Bri to return to a belief in God,
I say: it doesn't work, though, with so many words, Bri was awed!

No wonder I dropped out of college! ! ! If God were so great, why did She have to make things so complex! ? ?

(December …..13th …….2017)

Thursday, December 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: biology,creation,god
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
please see my title.

if you are in a hurry or don't care for science, DON'T read Denis's poem.but there are a lot of interesting and complimentary comments on its page,
at:

/poem/original-soup-of-life/

the above is a 'partial link' to the poem's page.

bri :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loke Kok Yee 12 January 2018

The only thing that will work with old Bri Is a jug of beer or a glass of wine Thanks bri.

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Bharati Nayak 10 January 2018

I have read Denis Mair's poem - Original Soup of Life..It is highly intellectual poem written in interesting way. I am sure readers will enjoy it.

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Tom Allport 15 December 2017

a very creative mix of food for thought the only trouble is? Bri's true love of vegetable matter! ..............nice one written Bri.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 December 2017

Your DANA soup is logically correct Appreciated the view points expressed

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