Vegetable is the only soup which, to me, does matter,
and, along with it, bread, which IS baked grain-batter.
I got sucked into this poem by force of my food habit,
thinking Denis spoke of soup: pea, tomato, or even rabbit.
If this is a ploy to get old Bri to return to a belief in God,
I say: it doesn't work, though, with so many words, Bri was awed!
No wonder I dropped out of college! ! ! If God were so great, why did She have to make things so complex! ? ?
(December …..13th …….2017)
I have read Denis Mair's poem - Original Soup of Life..It is highly intellectual poem written in interesting way. I am sure readers will enjoy it.
a very creative mix of food for thought the only trouble is? Bri's true love of vegetable matter! ..............nice one written Bri.
Your DANA soup is logically correct Appreciated the view points expressed
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The only thing that will work with old Bri Is a jug of beer or a glass of wine Thanks bri.