Shahzia Batool

Freshman - 605 Points (Pakistan)

Confidence


Go
anywhere else in the world
if you can,
but listen
you can't cross
the boundaries of my heart
as your smile is synonymous to life
your person has the warmth
of summer in the dead cold of winter,
the one, whose bonding is gaining grounds with me
and the roots are getting deep and strong!

Submitted: Tuesday, July 02, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, July 24, 2013

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,059 Points Kanav Justa (2/2/2014 12:10:00 PM)

    a wonderful sweet poem this is, , , loved it a lot, , (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points Yasmeen Khan (7/7/2013 11:46:00 AM)

    Always within the boundaries of your heart, escapade is not possible and it gives you confidence, lovely write! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,743 Points Sallam Yassin (7/7/2013 2:30:00 AM)

    It's outstanding piece of art bravo
    and thanks to share (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (7/6/2013 7:32:00 PM)

    excellent write Shahzia. I enjoyed this read (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Passionate Reader (7/5/2013 2:48:00 PM)

    A spectacular start! ! ! i loved it.

    Go
    anywhere else in the world
    if you can,
    but listen
    you can't cross
    the boundaries of my heart

    Striking lines! ! ! Trust and confidence enhances the beauty of a relationship and makes it strong and long lasting. your smile is synonymous to life is really eye-catching and quotable! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Lasoaphia Quxazs (7/5/2013 6:51:00 AM)

    What is confidence? It is a sure feeling that you are the child of the Universe and have that same right here as anyone else. You are right, keep on, know who you are. And you are wonderful. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,774 Points Ramesh Rai (7/4/2013 10:53:00 AM)

    confidence is required at every step of life. brillint write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,307 Points Valsa George (7/4/2013 9:41:00 AM)

    A very strong expression of passion finding deep roots in your thoughts and your very being! There is an air of unfailing confidence and complete trust! A small poem with a weighty content and beautiful rendition! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Lasoaphia Quxazs (7/4/2013 9:34:00 AM)

    Always hope in in the best, but take what comes and deal with it. These are great hopeful words. Lovely. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 339 Points Danny Draper (7/4/2013 7:14:00 AM)

    The growth of bonds and strength of enmeshed emotions as fondness becomes love and beautifully written here. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,166 Points Thomas A Robinson (7/4/2013 1:13:00 AM)

    Confidence in the singular or the plural.
    One confidence is a cornerstone to a house.
    Confidences, north and south, east and west make a foundation
    for a home. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chetna Sharma (7/3/2013 6:00:00 AM)

    The poem explores a theme which though has been touched by many but not this way. Confidence is synonymous with trust, when u trust a person u are confident that nothing would go wrong. You would be with them forever. Much appreciated Shazia! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 267 Points David Wood (7/3/2013 4:59:00 AM)

    'your smile is synonymous to life your person the warmth of summer in the dead cold of winter', such beautiful lines, a brilliant concept in a perfect poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,761 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (7/2/2013 7:13:00 PM)

    bonding is gaining grounds
    roots are getting deep and strong
    Confidence in love beautifully expressed. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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