Color Me Poem by LaRon Green Sr.

and loving brings meaning to life! love this one!

Sweet write, living for love and validation.

LaRon, smiles came upon my lips as I read your words...I could see the color of light in words.....smiles n blessings....DeVa

beautiful poem, love is love... Rose)))))

Love the poem, though might I ask something without offending you? Are you yelling through the whole poem? The reason I ask this is the entire poem is in caps. I know I've written poem like that in a hurry. Actually mine was the first letter of every word. The reason being is so I didn't have to worry about missing any caps right off the bat. I still have a couple I haven't corrected. Some in paragraph form too. Like the one you just read. I just fix it. I have so many it so hard to keep track. Anyways I'm hoping that not all poems are like this. For it makes them harder to read and comprehend. And you as the writer want as easy as possible for the reader to read your poem/story.

Oh Laron, this poem really specially made in jar of love...the lines created with creative mind, flattering with awesome feeling..that's good..very enjoyable..but i wonder if there's a reason why you write all in capital letter..is that to show how excited you are..but you already sounds great even in small letter :) keep writing a great poem_Unwritten Soul

IS A BEGINNING, I AM COUNTING MY BLESSING TO THE END, IF LOVING YOU IS WRONG great lines...really nice lines...

Wabi Sabi (2/2/2012 7: 50: 00 PM) IF LOVING YOU IS WRONG I DONT WANT TO BE RIGHT, I JUST WANT YOU TO COLOR ME YOUR COLOR, LIKE YOU WANT ME i like this phrase. great! i so agree....very nice but also...i agree here....yelling through the whole poem? see if you could please fix this small anomaly be happy :)

IF LOVING YOU IS WRONG I DONT WANT TO BE RIGHT, I JUST WANT YOU TO COLOR ME YOUR COLOR, LIKE YOU WANT ME i like this phrase. great!

A fun poem that brought a smile to my face and yet it seems to come from the heart. Keep writing, LaRon!