Finders Keepers Poem by LaRon Green Sr.

Finders Keepers

Rating: 4.8


Finding something new
isn't always true
the one that hold
your heart instore
you was brought
in their misery
no pity
figure thee
now you are sore
from so much pain
nothing to gain
bored of the games
only you to blame
tired of your life
for whats it is
in for worth
don't be a shame
we all fall
to the victim
of the games
think twice
restore your life
don't be stick
like glue
sometimes it goes
out the door
with know clue
I thought you knew
before the do
they leave you
with the flu
sometimes things
we find isn't
worth a dime
of your time
let it be
for those
that like to be
stung by a bee
finders keepers
but not me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
<font color =fusha>Amy 01 April 2009

thats brilliant i really liked it nice one :)

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<font color =fusha>Amy 01 April 2009

thats brilliant i really liked it nice one :)

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Jessica Workman 02 April 2009

thats a nice poem and had probley lots of thoughts

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 06 April 2009

Yea sometime life sucks.........and seems devoid of any meaning........good write........

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Chitra - 07 April 2009

thought provoking..so much to life and yet at times everything seems to be just a big black hole

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Deep Mukherjee 04 February 2012

a very good one; there is a good flow and optimistic thinking......a thread of interesting words too! !

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May Namoc 09 April 2009

nice piece. keep writing!

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Marilyn Lott 09 April 2009

Very informative poem, LaRon. Keep writing and sharing. Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Ency Bearis 09 April 2009

nice write...a thoughts to ponder...

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Naidz Ladia 07 April 2009

very nice..i like the line''think twice'..a very nice piece.. naizz

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