Black as can be
you staring at me
it wasn't meant
to be
you cheating on me
how sad can that be
me laying around
for thee
you disguising bee
I should have
left you
before (3) three o'clock
at the sound of
the beep
you two timing tree
the door has closed
you are out the door
I don't want you
no more
it's no more
open doors
for sure
Very painful, if it's locked then somebody must inside or taken the key away after locking?
..sad though true..but u did the right thing by ending the useless bee from collecting more honey.....Winnie
a touching poem..loved that way of writing..that feeling of no more..after her there will be a closed door...enjoyed the reading..10++++
very sad ending but it's better to close the door for that disguising bee... well written and thanks for sharing. best regards, jdh811
Well, you sure told her, in no uncertain terms. Good one. '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn
I dont know why but this poem made me laugh..probably cause you werent afraid to use those metaphors...Great write....I give it a ten! ! <33Payyton
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
seems you wrote this with a lot of pain and anger.. like it; D