Bri's Third "Wife-No-Longer" …[ Marital Fantasy Land; Some Lies; Humour? ; Suggested By Don Kubicki's Poem ‘it Never Fails' ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Bri's Third "Wife-No-Longer" …[ Marital Fantasy Land; Some Lies; Humour? ; Suggested By Don Kubicki's Poem ‘it Never Fails' ]



Bri's Third "Wife-no-longer" …[ Marital Fantasy Land; Some Lies; Humour? ; Suggested By Don Kubicki's Poem ‘It Never Fails' ]

MY 3rd wife was a little stupid, and a fine baker,
but in bed, six night out of seven, she was a faker.

Monday's she was singer/actress Madonna,
singing so softly to me: "Bri, do ya wanna? "
Tuesday, of course she was Tuesday Weld.
A finer blonde gal Bri's ne'er since held!

Wednesday, Donna …[yes, Don,3rd's real name]....
played L. Taylor [of ‘Cat on a Hot Tin Roof' fame].
Thurs. D took the role of another actress, N. Wood;
I'd relive THOSE nights...if only I, old Bri, could.

Fridays, after returning from a fish fry,
D'd play Juliet to Sh'speare's Romeo (Bri) .
Saturday, ‘Kids' Day', D was Ms. Temple (Shirley) .
And I'd play my favorite, the Three Stooges' "Curly".

But my 3rd wife, Donna, was her own self every Sunday.
After all, even God rested,1 day, preparing for Monday!


(November …9th …2019)

Saturday, November 9, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy,god,humorous,marriage,sex
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This (a bit edited now)was some of my comment on Don Kubicki's fine poem: It Never Fails.

check out his poem if you care to.

bri


:)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 20 November 2019

Well, humour is (what else) humour and if not enjoyed in true spirit it pains like a tumour. But I liked it and unconditionally so.

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Bri Edwards 16 November 2019

This wife DID bake (yay!) and her first husband's (of four she had; i was the last?) last name is/was Baker! bri :)

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Bharati Nayak 12 November 2019

Well, Bri never let us know who is he- -a fact or a fiction. Yet, we all enjoy his humour.

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Valentin Savin 11 November 2019

Your Donna is not really the Beatles’ Lady Madonna. Nevertheless, it has something in common. With the exception that: Your third Donna every Sunday Let you go and rest till Monday.

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Bri Edwards 10 November 2019

well, " it" in the title should be " It" . and i accidentally have the poem title twice. i TRIED to make corrections but to no avail. : ( bri :)

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