Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 39,822 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

Awkward Dream - Poem by Aftab Alam

An awkward dream, I dreamt
We all had a beautiful tail
That revealed the truth
It amazed and marveled I
If said something which was a lie
It flickered with shy
Fearlessly said the truth
It went up to the head high
If feared with their wives
Or criminals or thieves
Tail was ‘tween the thigh.

(Women were untouched with the new sprout)

Women sat basking into the sun
Knitting, gossiping merely for fun
Kids played, quarreled and run
Colorful tail cap with proud
A hope to wrap vice with shroud

Suddenly heard a shout and tail
Went ‘tween the thigh with face pale

I Jumped out of bed with color fade
Bahar asked, dreamt awkward, plz tell

I laughed it off and nodded, No
My hand went back in search
Nothing could I find and then perched
Into the dream world to make it true

Topic(s) of this poem: dream

Comments about Awkward Dream by Aftab Alam

  • Rookie - 80 Points Alexander Coppedge (9/15/2013 8:45:00 AM)

    The intent nof this art is wonderful and mind capturing Yet the sway in the work needs to be address to bring out its fullness (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,112 Points Heather Wilkins (7/12/2013 10:21:00 PM)

    this is an awkward dream a good read (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,496 Points Patricia Grantham (7/6/2013 10:10:00 PM)

    The world of dreams can be very intrinsic
    sometimes. It is up to us to sort them out
    and put them in the right perspective. Good. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,014 Points Yasmeen Khan (6/29/2013 3:49:00 AM)

    A very weird dream with many symbols. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,612 Points Elena Sandu (6/26/2013 8:07:00 AM)

    What a dream, haha loved it! . (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,869 Points Wahab Abdul (6/25/2013 10:45:00 PM)

    a tail in men nice dream and awakward dream...a fight against lies.. nice one. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,964 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (6/25/2013 11:34:00 AM)

    Hmm as u say it was quirky, but d poem funtastic'. Perhaps springing frm d human embryo tails. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 25, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 12, 2015

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