'And This Year's Winner Is.....'...Who Cares? ....[birds Seeking Food; Very Short; Humour/Humor] Poem by Bri Edwards

'And This Year's Winner Is.....'...Who Cares? ....[birds Seeking Food; Very Short; Humour/Humor]

Rating: 5.0


The sparrows line up for their TAKE-off
on twigs strong enough not to BREAK off.
The time is drawing NEAR....
for event of the YEAR.....,
when crumbs are thrown out from the BAKE-off.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
a fanciful idea. i like both crumbs and birds. i may have been watching sparrows finding bread crumbs or birdseed outside my apartment window with snow surrounding them.

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(Feb.2006; revised 2013)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Draper 20 February 2013

This is a great musing, Bravo Sir. Great imagery and the hint of freshly baked cake. MMMMM

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 25 January 2013

bread crumbs are thrown not only for birds but also to the human at different situations! what you see through your window is very spectacular!

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