Musfiq us shaleheen

Silver Star - 3,740 Points (31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

An Autumnal Dream - Poem by Musfiq us shaleheen

A set of dreams as autumnal cloud
Drifts again and again -
I bought all plucked flowers,
perches into a flower basket
again and again

At dark sunk night I dreamed full moon
At full moon I never dreamed dark night
I saw beauty and truth hide behind melody
Tried to rescue love and hope
again and again

Lining my eyes towards her path
Though I could not touch her
I saw petals of roses plucked and wither
A flower basket behold an empty heart

I dreamed that you would come to me,
At full moon night with some sticks of flowers
I am passionate and temp
For waiting and waiting for you
I want to behold thy forever and ever-

If you don't come again on my lonely lane
I will be wandered through autumnal cloud,
with my dream angel
As like as she represent you! !

- @Musfiq us shaleheen 31st January,2013

Topic(s) of this poem: autumn, dream, love

Form: Prose Poem


Poet's Notes about The Poem

If you don't come again on my lonely lane
I will be wandered through autumnal cloud,
with my dream angel
As like as she represent you! !

Comments about An Autumnal Dream by Musfiq us shaleheen

  • .., Rahman .., Henry .., Rahman .., Henry (2/6/2014 10:40:00 PM)

    A Jivananada Dash, after a long time, once again! (Report) Reply

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  • Abaka Blessing Anastasia Abaka Blessing Anastasia (4/2/2013 2:34:00 PM)

    lining ur eyes towards her path make the dreams come into reality. amazing rhymes. good work. (Report) Reply

  • Asif Andalib Asif Andalib (2/10/2013 9:13:00 AM)

    Beautiful write. I like it (Report) Reply

  • Poetic Passion (2/1/2013 3:43:00 AM)

    very romantic poem with nicely penned.. beautiful imagery. (Report) Reply

  • Kelvin Owusu Kelvin Owusu (1/31/2013 11:59:00 PM)

    I saw petals of roses unplugged and wither
    A flower basket behold an empty heart

    Amazing line and poem, this is nicely penned (Report) Reply

  • Sallam Yassin Sallam Yassin (1/31/2013 12:41:00 PM)

    lovers are dreamers
    always
    dream for bitter future of love
    and you represent that very well (Report) Reply

  • Musfiq Us Shaleheen Musfiq Us Shaleheen (1/31/2013 11:09:00 AM)

    sorry sir it was a slip of pen(not whiter will be wither) (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham Hazel Durham (1/31/2013 7:48:00 AM)

    A very introspective poem alluring and heartwrenching, as you wait for your beloved! (Report) Reply

  • Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (1/31/2013 7:30:00 AM)

    A most alluring poem, with vivid imagery and imagination. I have one thing bothering me
    you perhaps can explain, (petals of roses unplugged and whiter) ...was the word whiter intended
    for it produces images of pure white innonence or wither, for the unplugged rose petals once
    separated are like soured loves that fall by the wayside and wither.
    There is much to this beautiful poem to warm a cold heart on a cold night under January's full moon. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 31, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, May 25, 2015


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