Musfiq us shaleheen

Rookie - 851 Points (31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

An Autumnal Dream


A set of dreams as autumnal cloud
Drifts again and again-
I bought all plucked flowers,
perches a flower basket again and again

At dark sunk night I dreamed full moon
At full moon I never dreamed dark night
I saw beauty and truth hide behind melody
Tried to rescue love and hope again and again

Lining my eyes towards her path
Though I could not touch her
I saw petals of roses plucked and wither
A flower basket behold an empty heart

I dreamed that you would come to me,
at full moon night with some sticks of flowers
I am passionate and temp for waiting and waiting for you
I want to behold thy forever and ever-

If you don't come again on my lonely lane
I will be wandered through autumnal cloud,
with my dream angel
As like as she represent you! !

- Shaleheen 31st January,2013

Submitted: Thursday, January 31, 2013
Edited: Friday, June 13, 2014

Topic of this poem: Love


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If you don't come again on my lonely lane
I will be wandered through autumnal cloud,
with my dream angel
As like as she represent you! !

Comments about this poem (An Autumnal Dream by Musfiq us shaleheen )

  • Rookie - 131 Points Rahman Henry (2/6/2014 10:40:00 PM)

    A Jivananada Dash, after a long time, once again! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Abaka Blessing (4/2/2013 2:34:00 PM)

    lining ur eyes towards her path make the dreams come into reality. amazing rhymes. good work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Asif Andalib (2/10/2013 9:13:00 AM)

    Beautiful write. I like it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Poetic Passion (2/1/2013 3:43:00 AM)

    very romantic poem with nicely penned.. beautiful imagery. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Kelvin Owusu (1/31/2013 11:59:00 PM)

    I saw petals of roses unplugged and wither
    A flower basket behold an empty heart

    Amazing line and poem, this is nicely penned (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,743 Points Sallam Yassin (1/31/2013 12:41:00 PM)

    lovers are dreamers
    always
    dream for bitter future of love
    and you represent that very well (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 851 Points Musfiq Us Shaleheen (1/31/2013 11:09:00 AM)

    sorry sir it was a slip of pen(not whiter will be wither) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,083 Points Hazel Durham (1/31/2013 7:48:00 AM)

    A very introspective poem alluring and heartwrenching, as you wait for your beloved! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,150 Points Thomas A Robinson (1/31/2013 7:30:00 AM)

    A most alluring poem, with vivid imagery and imagination. I have one thing bothering me
    you perhaps can explain, (petals of roses unplugged and whiter) ...was the word whiter intended
    for it produces images of pure white innonence or wither, for the unplugged rose petals once
    separated are like soured loves that fall by the wayside and wither.
    There is much to this beautiful poem to warm a cold heart on a cold night under January's full moon. (Report) Reply

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