Treasure Island

Musfiq us shaleheen

(31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

An Autumnal Dream


A set of dreams as autumnal cloud
Drifts again and again-
I bought all plucked flowers,
perches a flower basket again and again

At dark sunk night I dreamed full moon
At full moon I never dreamed dark night
I saw beauty and truth hide behind melody
Tried to rescue love and hope again and again

Lining my eyes towards her path
Though I could not touch her
I saw petals of roses plucked and wither
A flower basket behold an empty heart

I dreamed that you would come to me,
at full moon night with some sticks of flowers
I am passionate and temp for waiting and waiting for you
I want to behold thy forever and ever-

If you don't come again on my lonely lane
I will be wandered through autumnal cloud,
with my dream angel
As like as she represent you! !

- Shaleheen 31st January,2013

Submitted: Thursday, January 31, 2013
Edited: Friday, June 13, 2014

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If you don't come again on my lonely lane
I will be wandered through autumnal cloud,
with my dream angel
As like as she represent you! !

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  • Abaka Blessing (4/2/2013 2:34:00 PM)

    lining ur eyes towards her path make the dreams come into reality. amazing rhymes. good work. (Report) Reply

  • Kelvin Owusu (1/31/2013 11:59:00 PM)

    I saw petals of roses unplugged and wither
    A flower basket behold an empty heart

    Amazing line and poem, this is nicely penned (Report) Reply

  • Sallam Yassin (1/31/2013 12:41:00 PM)

    lovers are dreamers
    always
    dream for bitter future of love
    and you represent that very well (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (1/31/2013 7:48:00 AM)

    A very introspective poem alluring and heartwrenching, as you wait for your beloved! (Report) Reply

  • Thomas A Robinson (1/31/2013 7:30:00 AM)

    A most alluring poem, with vivid imagery and imagination. I have one thing bothering me
    you perhaps can explain, (petals of roses unplugged and whiter) ...was the word whiter intended
    for it produces images of pure white innonence or wither, for the unplugged rose petals once
    separated are like soured loves that fall by the wayside and wither.
    There is much to this beautiful poem to warm a cold heart on a cold night under January's full moon. (Report) Reply

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