Musfiq us shaleheen

Freshman - 923 Points (31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

The Lost Spring


This day you left me
And spring lost its flower forever
At early spring, young called never
Again in a low silent day,
I heard the crisping of a lost grasshopper

In a black and white glow dream
Far away from the silky moon sprung
There birds feathers were oping with high delicate
Though Pale petals were losing their pixel with pleasant
But the high divine melody colored the deep purple

Then another high spring fallen to light purple
Yellow flowers bloom on her pale face again
At Night mild murmur cools the heart of the passionate
And the Sunflower rises on the first shines of sun
Melts with a dream after a long winter washed

Musfiq us shaleheen,12th February,2014

Submitted: Tuesday, February 11, 2014
Edited: Saturday, July 12, 2014

Topic of this poem: spring


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  • Gold Star - 8,401 Points Daniel Brick (7/25/2014 5:20:00 AM)

    This poem is a lovely evocation of the spring season, both for its beauty and for its memories. You use of colors is remarkable - I especially like the purple - it makes spring not only a riot of growing things but also an explosion of colors
    after the dullness of winter. You wrote of your appreciation of my spring poem and now I can express my appreciation of yours. We may live thousands of miles apart but poetry and spring create a unity in our two minds. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Elias Uddin (2/20/2014 10:14:00 AM)

    Melts with a dream after a long winter washed

    nice idea. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,601 Points Md Asadullah (2/16/2014 9:30:00 AM)

    Thanks for sharing your beautiful poem, I enjoyed reading it :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,898 Points Hazel Durham (2/16/2014 5:42:00 AM)

    I'm lost for words, I love this work of supreme beauty, so delicate with lines that leave a trail of the comfort of hope!
    Thank you so much for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,354 Points Patricia Grantham (2/15/2014 9:02:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem written just in time for Valentines Day. Your expressions of
    love is great in this write. Love compared to flowers that will soon again bloom
    in freshness and renewed.Very sweet poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,179 Points Valsa George (2/14/2014 11:22:00 PM)

    This day you left me
    And spring lost its flower forever

    The poem opens on a note of sadness.... but it ends with a touch of hope and 'flowers once again blooming on her pale face'! ! Enjoyed reading it! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 320 Points Poetheart Morgan (2/14/2014 1:10:00 PM)

    HOPE! ! ! HOPE! ! ! ! Finally the winter went away....gone....Now is time of a new bloom Poet. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,782 Points Sallam Yassin (2/14/2014 8:55:00 AM)

    sweet and elegant piece of art
    Bhai (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,567 Points Sayeed Abubakar (2/14/2014 8:45:00 AM)

    Nice imagery. You have a true poetic genius. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,203 Points Kanniappan Kanniappan (2/14/2014 3:51:00 AM)

    Nice and well written poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,751 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (2/14/2014 3:41:00 AM)

    Then another high spring fallen to light purple
    Here we await spring. You wrote a beautiful one for the lost spring. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (2/14/2014 3:24:00 AM)

    I am a winter grasshopper , praying for all these thing to come.
    Beautiful in a mystical way. You have captured the spirit of winter and spring. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 175 Points Vizard Dhawan (2/14/2014 2:28:00 AM)

    very heart touching and great poem to read (Report) Reply

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