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Musfiq us shaleheen

Rookie - 618 Points (31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

The Loser


Again the day had come
When I had concentrated on those coins
That was all for mine but lost
And the cyclone rolled those dust with gust

Earn after born at my mother’s shack
Penny to penny kept into my empty soul
Sounding low when filled with sorrow,
Blew all those through this hollow

The day had gone forever
And I am the Loser, lost more than I loss
Collect other coins that less than I lost
And the Lord will be paid the ultimate cost

Submitted: Friday, January 31, 2014
Edited: Sunday, February 02, 2014

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The Loser who lost all coins that collects in his life...
but coins were insufficient when he want to paid his ultimate dues..


- Shaleheen,31stJanuary,2014

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  • Rookie Poetic Passion (2/14/2014 11:12:00 AM)

    i also say, this is a very sad poem of a life that we see any where in the world...
    Nice imagery with real poetic feelings..
    very nicely written.. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,285 Points Geetha Jayakumar (2/6/2014 6:40:00 AM)

    Very sad write. One is not a looser till one doesn't feel within. As long as will power is there, he can never be a looser..... But if lost from inner heart, even if he may be successful, he will remain as looser....
    A looser can be winner
    and a winner one can be a looser too. Beautiful write. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

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