Musfiq us shaleheen

(31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

Beauty of Rose


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When the rose buds have bloomed
vigorous dreams have flooded the heart glee
dumbness has flashed on the pensive mood -
quaking mind has grown
into the nucleus of dragging love
ocean of emotions have catalyzed the kinky close
deep aches have popped at the heart and stone
when render has conceived
the glimmer chords have become splashed
utmost has inflamed and grown to outburst,
bursts into the fire of gaiety -
psyche has poured the fathomless passion till death

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@Musfiq us shaleheen,28th November,2012

Submitted: Wednesday, November 28, 2012
Edited: Monday, September 22, 2014

Topic(s): Beauty


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utmost inflames and outburst,
bursts into fire of gaiety-
Psyche pours fathomless passion till death.

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  • Saiom Shriver (10/21/2013 12:19:00 PM)

    quaking mind is nucleus of dragging love, In 7 years you write of the mystery that fear blocks love.
    the glimmer becoming the fire is also very beautiful. Allah has given you your pen. (Report) Reply

  • Madina Morris (12/7/2012 9:57:00 AM)

    Hmmm...i can tell its alot going on in this poem, maybe a little too much going on in this poem, but i love the power and beauty in your choice of words. Very nice :) (Report) Reply

  • Abaka Blessing (12/6/2012 4:25:00 AM)

    a poem 2 read over and over. nice words, powerful art piece. i love dis line 'quaking mind is nucleus of dragging love'', i will love 2 read more of u work. (Report) Reply

  • Payal Parande (12/4/2012 8:23:00 AM)

    it is brilliant........the flow of words the well pinned lines..they are just amazing

    thank you for sharing sir
    payal (Report) Reply

  • Nader Baheri (12/2/2012 9:51:00 AM)

    awesome..
    nice proses and flowing lines and wonderful words, used in this marvelous poem.
    muchas gracias for sharing~nb (Report) Reply

  • Jahan Zeb (12/1/2012 9:21:00 AM)

    One can thing of the strength of this poem after reading it. The words sound very strong like the message of the poem. Most words are used metaphorically and that makes it interesting for the readers.

    Very Matured. (Report) Reply

  • Gulsher John (11/30/2012 7:05:00 PM)

    like an abstract piece of art the picture z pregnant with so many ideas, different shades and strokes enhance its beauty.......
    full of meaning and widen perception.........
    like to read this matured piece of art (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (11/30/2012 7:33:00 AM)

    A very abstract, colourful, explosion of words embracing the reader! Liked this poem! (Report) Reply

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