Beauty Of Rose Poem by Musfiq us shaleheen

Beauty Of Rose

Rating: 3.5


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When a bud became a rose,
vigorous dreams flooded the heart glee
dumbness flashed on the pensive mood -
quaking mind is the nucleus of dragging love
ocean of emotions catalyzed the kinky close
deep aches popped the heart and stone
render conceived,
the glimmer chords splashed
utmost inflames grew to outburst,
bursts into the fire of gaiety -
psyche poured the fathomless
passions till death

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@Musfiq us shaleheen,28th November,2012

Wednesday, November 28, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,rose
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
beauty of rose

rose

rose

rose................rose............rose..........rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Xelam Kan™ 30 November 2012

like an abstract piece of art the picture z pregnant with so many ideas, different shades and strokes enhance its beauty....... full of meaning and widen perception......... like to read this matured piece of art

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Jahan Zeb 01 December 2012

One can thing of the strength of this poem after reading it. The words sound very strong like the message of the poem. Most words are used metaphorically and that makes it interesting for the readers. Very Matured.

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Nader Baheri 02 December 2012

awesome.. nice proses and flowing lines and wonderful words, used in this marvelous poem. muchas gracias for sharing~nb

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very enthusiastic. I admit it caught me by suprise. a nice suprise.

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 28 November 2012

Very strong images are being expressed here, forming deep thought in life. Thanks for sharing.

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Chinedu Dike 29 July 2019

A free flight of creativity on winged imagination. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Khairul Ahsan 10 December 2013

A beautiful poem. 'quaking mind is nucleus of dragging love, ' Loved this line.

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Saiom Shriver 21 October 2013

quaking mind is nucleus of dragging love, In 7 years you write of the mystery that fear blocks love. the glimmer becoming the fire is also very beautiful. Allah has given you your pen.

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Ryan Morris 08 December 2012

Very deep and thought provoking. Well done.

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Madina Morris 07 December 2012

Hmmm...i can tell its alot going on in this poem, maybe a little too much going on in this poem, but i love the power and beauty in your choice of words. Very nice :)

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