Musfiq us shaleheen

(31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

A Commitment to Love


A little say to you, my darling-
You don't come and love me
I can't commit you as because
I am not alone, I loved thee-
A millions of patriotic heart,
are hopefully waiting for me
And I have been hearing thee,
voices from dawn to till night-
They are calling me as slam-bang,
with a same lyric and melody
As like as a national anthem,
is sang as sonorous by together thee
Darling, I can love thy if you love thee
If you come and go with me there
and sing a song what they are singing
I commit you that I will be with you
forever and ever-

- Shaleheen,3rd March,2013

Submitted: Saturday, March 02, 2013
Edited: Friday, June 13, 2014

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if you love thee i will love you- A commitment for love

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