Musfiq us shaleheen

Veteran Poet - 1,545 Points (31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

A Will - Poem by Musfiq us shaleheen

A bird breaks cage finally fly away
Takes a breath with full of oxygen
Certainly circulation of,
blood picked up too high
A rising speed accelerate hopes
Try to set a direction to nestle
A dream to survive his children
who are still waiting for him there
A fear of fire still,
changes his direction
A will to wish him to survive,
till to reach at nest

-Shaleheen,22nd February,2013


Poet's Notes about The Poem

A will for survive

Comments about A Will by Musfiq us shaleheen

  • Gold Star - 6,896 Points Hazel Durham (3/9/2013 5:55:00 AM)

    A great piece on the will to survive against all the odds! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 98 Points Vivek Tiwari (3/5/2013 9:43:00 PM)

    GREAT IMAGERY
    GREAT POEM
    BIRD`S WILL IS GREAT (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,151 Points Sallam Yassin (2/26/2013 4:39:00 AM)

    To survive
    till to reach at nest
    that a will for rest/ well done (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, June 13, 2014


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