A Will Poem by Musfiq us shaleheen

A Will

Rating: 4.4


A bird has broken the cage
finally fly away
takes a breath
with full of oxygen
Certainly circulation of
blood picks up too high
A rising speed accelerates hope
try to set a direction to nestle
A dream to survive his chicks
yet who are waiting there
A fear of fire
still changes his direction
A will to wish him to survive
until to reach at the nest

@Musfiq us shaleheen
22nd February,2013

Friday, February 22, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: hope
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A will for survive
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 09 March 2013

A great piece on the will to survive against all the odds!

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Vivek Tiwari 05 March 2013

GREAT IMAGERY GREAT POEM BIRD`S WILL IS GREAT

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Sallam Yassin 26 February 2013

To survive till to reach at nest that a will for rest/ well done

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