Viola Grey

Rookie - 0 Points (Feb '73 / NZ)

All I Really Want.... - Poem by Viola Grey

So....
this is my mind -
a light I cannot switch off
illuminating with clarity
the rusty demons of childish dreams,
the sad truth behind the smiles.

So....
this is my heart -
walled up in this castle
created from sorrows past,
built by my radiating mind,
protected from the bitter dragons
of life's cruel fate.

So....
this is my soul -
lying, naked, upon the dusty pavement
waiting for you
to cleanse me once more,
to cradle me in shadows
with your soft smile.

And you ask me...

What is it I want from you?

Well....
All I want is to enter your mind,
all I want is to touch your heart,
all I want is to breathe within your soul,
let each dull beat speak,
let the words be true.

I want you to pick up my soul,
cradle my heart,
fight the dragons
inside my mind.

All I really want....
is you.

16/12/08


Comments about All I Really Want.... by Viola Grey

  • Rookie - 83 Points Bullion Grey (4/2/2009 4:04:00 AM)

    My hope is that whoever you were writing about or to, they are still with you. A brazen quality to this scribble that is the essense of an aware spirit. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Existential Despair (2/27/2009 4:27:00 PM)

    This feels like it was my heart speaking to me in all its truthfulness...v.g your skill behind the pen is unprecedented (ps this fights with cupid for 1st place) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Laurie Hill (1/22/2009 9:50:00 PM)

    Really enjoyed this.....a good write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kris Smith (12/27/2008 2:41:00 PM)

    Top write my upside down friend you are brill 10 +++ Chris (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 87 Points Kesav Easwaran (12/24/2008 4:27:00 AM)

    an innocent child like loving heart yearning for a love cradle...good piece, Viola...pleasingly expressive...10 (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 672 Points Saint Cynosure (12/17/2008 9:53:00 PM)

    So...
    I know I do not read like I should, I am hardly ever on here I have not posted anything in weeks.
    Well... I see that you are the one picking up my slack with wonderful works as this one...
    10+++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (12/17/2008 5:32:00 AM)

    very appealing, i could realate to each and every word.
    10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie totally disturbed (12/16/2008 5:31:00 PM)

    I really like this you express your feelings very well.. take care Wendy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tai Chi Italy (12/15/2008 7:16:00 PM)

    Great work Viola! I think you describe what really each and every one of us wants, so equally, hope you get what you want and keep it forever in your arms, smiling at you, TAi (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 15, 2008



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