Alone Poem by Viola Grey
Alone
Walking alone
through lifes rocky path
with nothing steady
to break my fall.
Broken on rocks
cutting the air,
bleeding on shores
never waning.
Crimson tide smiles
wash me away,
dragging my heart
into forever.
23/07/08
i really do love this poem maybe you would like some of mine
sorrowfully the imagery of the tragedy we sometimes face in this 'world' of ours. Hopefully this was a passing thing and that healing has replaced the sadness. You have a talent dear lady. Well done. Ten Again!
Hey super V this is excellent a 10 in mine and everyones book.
seems sad yet we all are dragged into the forever....could be, that last line a title for a novel? thank you for sharing.... BG
Tis a sad poem but I really liked how the crimson tide smiles on you. Great imagery and writing as usual. Karin Anderson
Great pathos and melancholy in this poem Viola, heartfelt indeed. Hope it isn't true though! Mark
this has great images for your reader... and I love your ending. this is writen very well. good job. Becca
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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wow i loved it very nice :)