LaSoaphia QuXazs

Rookie - 2 Points (1934 / Budapest, Hungary, living in the USA)

Adept!


In the school of life there are many rooms,
As Jesus talked about his father, who have a big volumes
On this earth you can find the many level of civilizations,
From primitives, next & next up to the smart scientist interventions.

We all have our fate to fulfill,
Learn what we have to in this life & go up our hill.
Each person's life is like a software in God's computer,
We born, live, go through temptations & we became a performer.

The Law is built into each person
Given a choice between Life or malediction
Some follows the wrong way, some tries hard to be good,
If he/she finds true peace, self confidence, health & happiness,
That means the lesson was understood.

Rich, poor, sad, sick or happy are all just a dream,
Everything is passing fast like a sunbeam,
We have the choice which side we accept,
If we are smart, no matter what comes, we can adept.

Submitted: Tuesday, March 06, 2012

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  • Rookie - 415 Points Yasmeen Khan (6/26/2013 2:52:00 PM)

    A great lesson in the school of life from a great teacher and adviser. I agree with Wahab Abdul your lucid choice of words is befitting to your themes. It feels more pleasant when you adorn the lines with some beautiful metaphors like: 'sunbeams' and 'go up our hill'
    It feels you are talking to your readers. It's so easy to visualize a lady sitting in front of us and lovingly teaching the lessens of life. I pray to God may you stay healthy and live long to spread the light of your wisdom in whole world. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Ekaterina M. Polischuk (3/10/2012 11:23:00 AM)

    what a powerful poem it is! great meaning, true words and wonderful heart melody of the poet. it contains useful message to us and it sounds perfectly. Bravo! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,675 Points Wahab Abdul (3/9/2012 12:11:00 PM)

    What a poem it is! I like the poem because of its dealing with the theme in a very lucid and simple way, I like your diction, and the way you put the things together, it could have not been better, really you are a talented one, I like attitude too, all these qualities make your poem a beautiful piece of art…I wish you a success in the poetic world, and I like you to read my poems especially ‘’I want to die’’ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Binish Cd (3/6/2012 9:24:00 AM)

    a well written poem, quite philosophical, , , , , , from a respected old lady, that gained from her experiences in life. (Report) Reply

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