A Wish To My Daughter Poem by LaSoaphia QuXazs

A Wish To My Daughter

Rating: 5.0


My sweet, little darling, you were the best,
One of the smartest child between all the rest.
You and I always know that you'll make it well,
On money cares you never have to dwell.

In the years when we were growing up together,
I thought you were my best friend and sometimes my elder.
You helped me to find always the good road,
You helped me with your advises to carry life's heavy load.

Your life must be always in the shinning sun,
Strength, courage is your inheritance in the brilliant dawn,
Let your life be a never ending success,
Only health, good life and happiness fit my princess.

I am sorry if you don't see what I always thought,
Probably you wouldn't take all my praises,
And in your mind you opposed and fought.

Even if our personality opposing each other,
I love you my child, your personality I never wish to alter.
You are the child of God and let life be your teacher

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 27 July 2011

Oh it really touch me deeply.......how a mother say that as different way love her child is purest style...I wish she read this, i wish it able creates a magical days in future...each word you share, you push a beat from heart and i was BOMB by explosion of smiles...LIke this SO MUCH...Keep it more keep touch by heart to the soul_Unwritten Soul

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Romeo Della Valle 31 July 2011

Wow! I am totally speechless! just reading this impressive and heart touching write! It brought tears to my eyes since it images of my daughter to my mind! My daughter is 20 and is living in Israel and ready to join the Army (draft) . I miss her very much! Your poem is a masterpiece and I am sure that it touches a lot of readers hearts! Thanks for sharing! +++ Keep inspiring the World! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from NYC

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 15 January 2017

Life is the best teacher. Every soul is child of God first. Every soul has freedom. A mother loves her child very much and a daughter is very special ever in her mother's eye. Mother wishes daughter to be courageous and like a shining sun. Very nice and sweet poem this is. An excellent one! Your affection for you daughter is well expressed here..10

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Yasmin Khan 23 June 2013

It is not just a poem, it is a dear wish from core of the heart of a loving and caring mother who is generous and open-hearted. How beautifully you end it with the words of reassurance to your daughter. As a mother I share your feelings dear LaSoaphia.

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Shahzia Batool 17 April 2013

Your life must be always in the shinning sun, Strength, courage is your inheritance in the brilliant dawn, Let your life be a never ending success, Only health, good life and happiness fit my princess..........A beautiful poem indeed! ! !

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 26 January 2012

Wow! im also speechless, one day when my daughter is old enough to understand life, i'll definately read this poem for her...awesome poem LaSoaphia!

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Binish Cd 04 January 2012

nice expression of words about the relationship between a mother and her daughter...............

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LaSoaphia QuXazs

LaSoaphia QuXazs

Budapest, Hungary, living in the USA
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