Shahzia Batool

Veteran Poet - 1,276 Points (Pakistan)

Aao Suraj Ko Ufaq Paar Utarta Dekhen! - Poem by Shahzia Batool

Kuchh naya kaam karen
or sochen
khud ko be-rubt khayalon k hawalay kr den
phir ye dekhen
kahan, kis tarha se kia hota he...
raat aati he kahan se
abhi chal kr dekhen
chaand ko dusri janib se palat kr dekhen
yeh jo rukhsaar-e-falak pr he shafaq...kesi he?
aao dekhen k dhanak rang ki shokhi me neha'n
raaz kia he k jo heraan kiye deta he?
neend wadi me yeh khwabon ka basera he kidhar?
khwab kia cheez hen
chal kr unhen choo kr dekhen
chandni shab ko chanaaron pe bikharta dekhen
aasmanon ko bahaaron me nikharta dekhen
aao suraj ko ufaq paar utarta dekhen! ! !


Comments about Aao Suraj Ko Ufaq Paar Utarta Dekhen! by Shahzia Batool

  • Rookie - 152 Points Muhammad Ali (12/27/2013 11:01:00 AM)

    bohat pyari shayari hy ap ki.
    m apna kahun to, ye nazm, or m, or ek cup chaey,5 behtreen minute hon gy. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Passionate Reader (6/30/2013 4:54:00 PM)

    neend wadi me yeh khwabon ka basera he kidhar?
    khwab kia cheez hen
    chal kr unhen choo kr dekhen

    lovely lines and a cute wish :) love your urdu poems! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,714 Points Ramesh Rai (5/15/2013 4:05:00 AM)

    poetry ka mazaa to tab aata hai jab use nature se judate hue dekhen. aap ki urdu poetry mein ye bahut hi nazdeek se nazar aata hai. waise, poetry, kavita, shayari iski ek hi language hai jo dil se nikalkar asman ko chhu jata hai. poetry ki juban to sitaren bhi samajh lete hai. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 827 Points Yasmeen Khan (4/25/2013 10:24:00 AM)

    It has amazing imagery and an innocent desire to see the moon from the other side, a beautiful poem first lines remind me Iqbal's 'Bazm e Anjum'
    Suraj Ne Jate Jate Shaam-e-Seh Qaba Ko
    Tasht-e-Ufaq Se Le Kar Lale Ke Phool Mare' the same scene makes you poem endearing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (3/31/2013 6:22:00 AM)

    chalo achha hai subah ke firaq me to hu
    kante hi sahi phoolon ki khawaab me to hun//
    and second one in Indian continental Issue.....dilon me jati dharm ke pahare hain
    mere jakham kitane gahare hain/ now regarding the poem its khubsurat poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sun Shine (1/25/2013 9:03:00 AM)

    woww! a feast for d senses! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Waseem A Malla (1/10/2013 4:30:00 AM)

    beautiful imagery, nice portrait of nature.... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,218 Points Saadat Tahir (9/10/2012 2:42:00 PM)

    chandni shab ko chanaaron pe bikharta dekhen
    aasmanon ko bahaaron me nikharta dekhen
    aao suraj ko ufaq paar utarta dekhen! ! !


    stunning allegories...photgraphic visuals...almost a perfect 10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,939 Points Soulful Heart (1/31/2012 11:41:00 PM)

    aao tumhe aur ubharta dekhen............ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 30, 2012



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