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Aao baaten karen! (Urdu)

Aao rang e shafaq!
Shokh rang e shafaq!
Mil k baaten karen,
Uss ki baaten karen...
Ik naey rang say waqt ko rok len,
Ik naey taur say her guzartay huey pal ko awaz den,
Or dhalti hui raat ki nabz ko thaam len
iss tarha
k kisi ko khabar bhi na ho,
Iss tarha
K koi shor bhi naa macchay...
Or shamma bhi baaton me shamil rahay,
Mah o anjum bhi jhuk jhuk k suntay rahen,
sir ko dhuntay rahen,
khwab buntay rahen,
kyun naa rang e shafaq!
Shokh rang e shafaq!
Ek fursat say aankhon me raaten karen,
Mil k baaten karen,
Uss ki baaten karen...

Submitted: Tuesday, March 20, 2012
Edited: Sunday, July 15, 2012


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  • Dinesh Nair (4/20/2014 2:23:00 AM)

    A poem that is a little wary of things but it has come out as a portrait of your invisible thoughts. A 10 for you Shahziaji..

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  • Amitava Sur (1/20/2014 3:19:00 AM)

    Though I don't know urdu but I could grab the essence of your beautiful write.... Stopping the time by quietly holding the night let's talk something new with a new dream where night itself will be a party to me in knitting a new dream of hope...... very nice.

    Shazia - incidentally today is my birth day, feeling very lonely, I dedicated this poem to my loved (An angel in the night) . you may read

  • Muhammad Ali (1/15/2014 12:26:00 AM)

    rawani or sadgi k sath, ek naey khush lamhay jesi, ye bhi nayi nazm hy. aapi, achi poem hy.
    waqt yaheen larkhara k gir jaey.
    raat ka aadha safar rehnay day.

  • Khubaib Mujtaba (12/29/2013 12:45:00 AM)

    Selecting the urdu language for writing such a poem shows the greatness of the poet. You know urdu itself has such potential that it directly touches the heart and minute things can be described using the language. Really i like it.
    Ik nye toer se guzarty huwae pal ko awaz de aur dalti huwe raat ko tham ley.

  • Deepak Sawhney (9/9/2013 7:45:00 AM)

    Ha! having read comments by erudite readers as below, I feel incompetent to offer any comments: -) . A beautiful write Shazia. Personally (my views) the depth of emotions as expressed in urdu cannot be replicated in english since very frequently there are no equivalent words. Thanks for the post.

  • Allemagne Roßmann (7/3/2013 4:37:00 PM)

    an impressive write- - baaton ki junoon

  • Allemagne Roßmann (7/3/2013 4:36:00 PM)

    Rang e shafaq ke mauke kaha dete hain ladkiyan, kudiyaan- -khwaab parchhaiyi hoke nikal jati hain
    A good write - -i like the oons in the lines.
    she hears each beam, each spectrum's syllable, each
    predicate re-verbs between breasts and,
    sun-kissed, sun-touched, sun-blushes, lashes to toes- - -

  • Passionate Reader (6/30/2013 4:49:00 PM)

    Ek fursat say aankhon me raaten karen,
    Mil k baaten karen,
    Uss ki baaten karen...

    simply beautiful! ! superb flow and lovely thought; Aoa baaten karen :))

  • Farah Ilyas (5/9/2013 12:14:00 PM)

    wao...your poems show that you not only have mastery to write poetry in English language but also in Urdu language..

    Ek fursat say aankhon me raaten karen,


    flow of the poem, flow me tooo. wao fabulous..

  • Farah Ilyas (5/9/2013 12:14:00 PM)

    wao...your poems show that you not only have mastery to write poetry in English language but also in Urdu language..

    Ek fursat say aankhon me raaten karen,


    flow of the poem, flow me tooo. wao fabulous..

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