Lillian Susan Thomas

*a Waltz Wave: Gathering Wild Flowers (Rewrite) - Poem by Lillian Susan Thomas

is crammed
with ev'ry
hue of
summer I
gather in my
blue apron
the sky
over the
I walk

Comments about *a Waltz Wave: Gathering Wild Flowers (Rewrite) by Lillian Susan Thomas

  • Ray Schreiber (2/11/2010 11:03:00 PM)

    I think I've commented on this one on another site...It still leaves me with the pleasurable feeling of having shared this walk and smelled these smells. Very well written. I like the sense of ambling your words produced so well. (Report) Reply

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  • fleur de lys (12/11/2009 11:09:00 AM)

    Living in a big city this makes me ache with longing for those 'sun drenched fields'. A lovely and gentle pastoral scene with the accompanying bliss portrayed so well. (Report) Reply

  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir Naseer Ahmed Nasir (11/13/2009 7:22:00 AM)

    Seems like an informal style of poetry, but nice to read and ponder on...

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  • Rachel Ann Butler (11/9/2009 12:37:00 PM)

    'Her lap filling with ev'ry hue and scent'

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 8, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 11, 2010

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