Lillian Susan Thomas


*a Waltz Wave: Gathering Wild Flowers (Rewrite) - Poem by Lillian Susan Thomas

A
mason
jar
is crammed
with ev'ry
fragrance
and
hue of
summer I
gather in my
blue apron
out-stretched
as
the sky
over the
sun-drenched
fields
I walk
through.


Comments about *a Waltz Wave: Gathering Wild Flowers (Rewrite) by Lillian Susan Thomas

  • Rookie - 4 Points Ray Schreiber (2/11/2010 11:03:00 PM)

    I think I've commented on this one on another site...It still leaves me with the pleasurable feeling of having shared this walk and smelled these smells. Very well written. I like the sense of ambling your words produced so well. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie fleur de lys (12/11/2009 11:09:00 AM)

    Living in a big city this makes me ache with longing for those 'sun drenched fields'. A lovely and gentle pastoral scene with the accompanying bliss portrayed so well. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 34 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (11/13/2009 7:22:00 AM)

    Seems like an informal style of poetry, but nice to read and ponder on...
    Regards

    Naseer (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Rachel Ann Butler (11/9/2009 12:37:00 PM)

    'Her lap filling with ev'ry hue and scent'

    Rachel Ann Butler (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 8, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 11, 2010


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