Musfiq us shaleheen

(31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

A Travel to Universe


An infinite travel in a time machine,
a universe to another universe-
with soul pours fathomless love

There is no edge of the universe -
there is no start and end of time -
there be all of heartless particle
love will be devoured by black hole!
as light consumed by it-
the infinite gravity,
extreme density-

The time machine exceeds light speed
Space and time-
four dimensional geometry
Time calculation,
Earth clock plus ninety degree right angle
if light exist and whatever the arbitrary -
I can travel past and future,
I know one day,
Universe should be inflated,
within a big crunch-

No men, no women- no love
Thy require nothing
Transfigured life into particles
I will be a particle,
stay at different universe
Endure wondering from universe to universe
Black hole to black hole
There should be an anti particle,
as like as me -
The existence of love should be speed -



-Shaleheen,12th December,2012, Dhaka

Submitted: Tuesday, December 11, 2012
Edited: Saturday, August 02, 2014

Topic(s): romantic


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Poet's Notes about The Poem

Endure wondering from universe to universe
Black hole to black hole
There should be an anti particle
The existence of love should be speed-

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  • Rookie - 81 Points Nader Baheri (12/15/2012 10:53:00 AM)

    an idea flashed through my mind:
    no particle then love wont be...so if love doesnt exist so the hatred, the passion, contempt, discrimination, race, and......wont exist too.
    there would be a wonderful universe..
    muchas gracias for sharing~nb (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,078 Points Hazel Durham (12/14/2012 6:30:00 AM)

    A very interesting poem with great imagery, amazing concept, I really enjoyed this cosmic journey! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 686 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (12/14/2012 5:02:00 AM)

    To translate it ambiguously i cud say from dis world to d netherworld too. Enjoyd yor mindboggling poem, u do amaze us poet. God bless. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 78 Points Payal Parande (12/13/2012 11:42:00 PM)

    you took me out in sky sir....and how beautiful the journey was. breathtaking

    thank you for sharing
    love
    payal (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 680 Points Gulsher John (12/13/2012 7:50:00 PM)

    unfortunately stumbled to get understand those astrophysicsal jargon.....few humble suggestions, may be not too juch relevant..... may be few notes could help us,
    2ndly in line 2 the article An is bit confusing....
    also this line Transfigured life to particle transfigured life into particles.., .....
    if I get correct then your poem contrasting two different cosmic level....micro and macro.....
    indeed tough task to carry....... keep penning and tnx for invitation... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 105 Points Elizabeth Padillo Olesen (12/13/2012 3:36:00 PM)

    I like the great span of space you reach out in expressing your lines. Partly scientific in language, partly groping to find meaning in existence... nicely structured and ended. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 750 Points Sallam Yassin (12/13/2012 8:06:00 AM)

    in the knowledge of god you are infinite
    you are the universe the limitation
    not for god (or his love)
    but only for us
    nice work out of boundary
    god bless u (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Jahan Zeb (12/13/2012 7:33:00 AM)

    To a universe unknown. This is an interesting piece. Nice imagery and a thought that is interesting and new. faster than light! that will be interesting.
    Very nice (Report) Reply

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