Shahzia Batool

Rookie - 603 Points (Pakistan)

A Quatrain (urdu) !


Dekhti aankh ki hadon mein nahi
dil ki gehrayyon mein pinhan hun
wo meri yaad mein nhi shamil
abb mein tanhayon mein tanha hun!

Submitted: Sunday, June 16, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, July 30, 2013

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  • Rookie - 415 Points Yasmeen Khan (4/22/2014 11:51:00 PM)

    Dil to samandar se bhi zyada ghere hote hen aur wohi in ki pinahayoon men utar sakta he jis ke paas dil ki aankh ho....brief and well-penned piece (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 141 Points Muhammad Ali (12/10/2013 4:27:00 AM)

    very nice lines. smooth, simple and mannerly. may i say afterwards...
    ye koi bhaid tha, jo ab khula hy.
    wo mery pas hy, jb sy gya hy.
    or wo jb sy gya hy, aadam.
    main ny khud ko hi nhn dekha hy.
    tenner.
    peace.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 141 Points Muhammad Ali (12/10/2013 4:25:00 AM)

    very nice lines. smooth, simple and mannerly. may i say afterwards...
    ye koi bhaid tha, jo ab khula hy.
    wo mery pas hy, jb sy gya hy.
    or wo jb sy gya hy, aadam.
    main ny khud ko hi nhn dekha hy.
    tenner.
    peace.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Faria Aslam (11/20/2013 8:09:00 AM)

    very touching
    a few lines are explaining the depth of loneliness (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Faria Aslam (11/20/2013 8:08:00 AM)

    very touching poem
    a few lines are explaining the depth of lonliness (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,706 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (6/19/2013 10:31:00 AM)

    Rubaayee well penned very heart touching (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (6/18/2013 12:37:00 PM)

    gehri soch me, me gultah ho..
    abb mein tanhayon mein tanha hun! ....waaaaooo ma'am u composed poetry ur heart, that is why its too nice like u..superb (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,668 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/18/2013 10:24:00 AM)

    dil ki gehrayyon mein pinhan hun
    In the depth of heart. Thank you for the nice poem. Maybe you can render this in English. Please also read my poem 'Heart's Depth' when you have time. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Passionate Reader (6/18/2013 6:39:00 AM)

    abb mein tanhayon mein tanha hun!

    sad but lovely! ! ! in few words you have said it all. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 607 Points Kavya . (6/18/2013 4:20:00 AM)

    wah wah kya khoob! really nice! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,040 Points Gulsher John (6/17/2013 10:36:00 AM)

    Wah..... ab ma tanhayon ma tanha hon.....splendid...
    So tragic so Romantic and so poignant........
    But sometimes it becomes a bliss.....
    The very line prompted the reflection of my all time favorite Mr.Keats.....
    Was lonely even in the company of his beloved who lived a steps ahead from his heart....
    Great penning Shazia (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points Yasmeen Khan (6/17/2013 2:47:00 AM)

    Deeply-felt loneliness experienced by any sensitive heart and it's sometime a bliss. (Report) Reply

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