Udiah (witness to Yah)

Rookie - 7 Points (1959 / USA)

A NEAT Comet


A comet came with a large metal core
Racing ‘cross the heavens toward the sun it tore
It started to shed its frozen surface
Of gasses, vapors, and minerals it bore

A collection of time from deep out in space
Now littered its trail with cosmic waste
But as its course closed in too near
It parted the flux of the Heliosphere

Then out of the Sun’s plasmatic sea
Leaped an enormous flare
That swiped the hare
A giant shock wave
From the forces that be

Gravity, centrifugal, and a nuclear blast
Sent the fuel supplier again on the chase
Back out to the heavens on a new pace
Flinging it further out into space
On a much longer run which might be its last










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Submitted: Friday, September 27, 2013
Edited: Friday, September 27, 2013

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  • Gold Star - 24,387 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (4/18/2014 4:07:00 AM)

    a very good poem pertaining to the comet which is nature's wonderful scenery when it arrives and comes to our sight. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Awa Bah (4/9/2014 1:06:00 PM)

    ths poem is neat just as the tittle (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 659 Points V P Mahur (3/11/2014 4:05:00 PM)

    Dear udiah
    the creation and destruction is the law of Nature. I like your way of expression.

    'Swing of Spring'
    The soft swing of fresh air
    Has brought joyous glare
    Moist with drenching love
    Engaged in the idol affair
    ............................
    ......................
    I want to share this poem with you.
    full of it you can find on my page. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,873 Points * Sunprincess * (12/13/2013 8:53:00 PM)

    this is a neat poem....comet's are very interesting... (Report) Reply

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