Musfiq us shaleheen

Rookie - 851 Points (31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

A Melancholic Song


Not enough depth to fill so feel to me
So long it’s longing the losing song
Feelings are falling on the rough floor
Not enough room to hide behind the melody

My night is going through tears of toil
Last drops are waiting for your departure
So many times it hanged me on the sky
No more roads to take off or take away

Dark is proof and profound over the sky
So long it’s paining the bored river bed
Crushing through the glitter of gold
Decays the moon and decades are lost

I who so nice to play days over lost
So mature through immature days gone
Dropping all drops to depth and dragged
So melancholy melts within dreams of life

- Musfiq us shaleheen,6th April,2014
- Khulna, Bangladesh

Submitted: Sunday, April 06, 2014
Edited: Monday, April 07, 2014

Topic of this poem: Life


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A Melancholic Song

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  • Rookie Arfa Iris (4/23/2014 11:45:00 PM)

    My night is going through tears of toil
    Last drops are waiting for your departure
    So many times it hanged me on the sky
    No more roads to take off or take away


    good! ! its really good...
    i too had a same phase n i know how it feels...

    its really good... amazing... (Report) Reply

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