A Hate To Hate Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Hate To Hate

Rating: 4.5


Reality and not the dreams
It has to be like sun beams
To work for it like a team
It will come out like music with theme

There is no use to pass on the blame
It is reality and not the game
It has some reasons to materialize
You must have enough reasons to realize

Go deep and think over
Don’t find excuses or cover
You may find the answer
It may be felt only by fewer

Don’t loose hope and courage
You have to try hard and manage
You may be capable in your young age
Try to control it without resorting to rage

Infuse it with real colors of life
The world may be war torn and full with strife
You may have to walk on the edge of knife
Share the secrets with you lovely wife

Carry it on with so much of joy
Life as it stands for enough to enjoy
It may be contentment that is not to be rushed
Rest all are illusions not to be counted and pushed

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wang Qian 06 August 2010

Your poem really shows so many fantastic things in our life. So intelligent and so charming! Dreams and reality just like the twin sisters always playing together but sometimes they would get angry with each other. Their game is a joke. We need to learn and work on it. A beautiful one....

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Hans Vr 02 August 2010

This one is really good with lots and lots of wisdom in it. If we can avoid the rage, have the courage, all so important. I like the stanza also very much that ends in rhymes on strife. I really believe in having no secrets for our wives. If we are not open and honest to our very closest relatives, who do we have to trust? I enjoyed all the wisdom and melodiousness of this poem thorougly. Very wel done.

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Maulin Shah 01 August 2010

Reality and not the dreams It has to be like sun beams..... only dreams may not work at all....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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