hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 30,190 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Brown Eyes Poem by hasmukh amathalal


Brown eyes with sparkling light,
Standing before me just to right,
Inviting me near but not to fight,
May be closer views and clear sight,

I could see whole world in it,
Two eyes as if deem lamps lit,
Why sudden interest in me hit?
Muscled body with physique fit,

May not be that simple reason,
Spring all over as main season,
Flowers booming with colours different,
Invitation seemed only reason apparent,

I too was ready for open meet,
Shaking body with crumbling feet,
Not knowing what was in store?
Nothing was wrong for ground to explore,

Miss was not easy but hard nut to crack,
Little hurry was sign to pack,
Patience was must for not going back,
Attempt sincere but confidence not lack,

Both realized the gravity of situation,
It was real and not first sight or infatuation,
Time was critical and need of an hour,
Relation to grow and not sour,

Kind gesture with open invite,
Desires grew with ambition ignite,
It was not time to say good night,
Grab the opportunity as the time was right,

Soon developed intense love and bond,
Deep relations and each other fond,
Love was to succeed with ultimate marriage,
Simple arrangement and not as carriage,

All was done with ease and comfort,
Both the families had understand and rapport,
Extending good will and complete support,
Nothing was going bad as suggested report

When I look back and simply ponder?
No simple answer but only wonder,
No clouds to make loud thunder,
Simple acknowledgement with easy surrender

Submitted: Tuesday, June 23, 2009
Edited: Monday, June 20, 2011

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  • Gold Star - 9,741 Points Heather Wilkins (8/17/2014 7:47:00 PM)

    a beautiful poem about a pair of brown eyes (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 127 Points Kirti Sharma (7/17/2014 1:58:00 AM)

    :) falling in love with the one having brown eyes... and spending the whole life peacefully and happily...
    wow! amazing write... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 127 Points Kirti Sharma (7/17/2014 1:58:00 AM)

    :) falling in love with the one having brown eyes... and spending the whole life peacefully and happily...
    wow! amazing write... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,894 Points Mihaela Pirjol (6/22/2014 3:07:00 AM)

    I enjoyed reading this eloquent poem. I can relate to it. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie bye bye... bye bye (10/30/2009 7:43:00 PM)

    Those brown eyes... love at first sight... everything tender and easy going... but no rush... everlasting... lovely to read... very lovely... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sabrina Perry (10/14/2009 8:20:00 PM)

    i have brown eyes<3 :) i want to thank you for sharing such a beautiful, amazing poem with me... your insight is incredible, might i add...

    LOVE.

    you sir, have made me fall for your poem, it drew me in completely, great work again. praise.

    Sabrina (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Whisperkwane Lamb (9/16/2009 2:00:00 PM)

    there is a reason...for making 'brown eyes blue' and the reason in your poem comes to who...sight is a pretty thing...with or without its wings...you are very good sir...very (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jester's P (9/14/2009 12:15:00 AM)

    i like it...brown eye are beautiful, and i have brown eyes...
    anyhow your poem is a story of life's journey seeing the world in a beautiful vision.
    nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Angelic Warrior (9/12/2009 8:07:00 AM)

    brown eyes are beautiful...because they are welcoming.....warm....the color of chocolate.... nice write! .....lovely (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 25 Points Mohammed Al-balushi (9/8/2009 3:24:00 AM)

    could see whole world in it, i like tis experssion, lucky girl with brown eyes (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Philosophy of a DewyFlower (8/27/2009 11:51:00 AM)

    When I look back and simply ponder?
    No simple answer but only wonder,
    No clouds to make loud thunder,
    Simple acknowledgement with easy surrender --> great

    the most eloquent languange: EYES LANGUAGE
    well done! I enjoyed it... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 64 Points Rafique Farooqi (8/23/2009 9:49:00 AM)

    Very lucky girl who is wiih beautiful eyes (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 43 Points Obinna Eruchie (8/16/2009 9:05:00 AM)

    Rich, elegant brown eyes that are moving. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Darshna Chopra (8/13/2009 8:34:00 PM)

    girls look beautiful with brown eyes...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chetna Purohit (8/13/2009 8:23:00 PM)

    female get more atracted by their eyes....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ratna Patel (8/12/2009 12:14:00 PM)

    girls havingbrowneyes have prefereential treatment....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ketan Rajgor (8/12/2009 12:04:00 PM)

    it is plus [point for girl....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kashi Paul (8/12/2009 11:19:00 AM)

    it is added advantage....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Umesh Lalvani (8/12/2009 11:15:00 AM)

    it is advantage....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ (8/11/2009 8:55:00 PM)

    Kinda sounds like when you meet someone for the first time
    Good rythm and clear writing style
    Good piece. (Report) Reply

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