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hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 14,493 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 14,493 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/31/2014 8:25:00 PM)

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    Great Poem


    Chris Lologa29 minutes ago
    The best things in life are free. Our hope is definitely in that which is not material. Maybe if people could see that as this poems suggest we could find harmony easier. Thanks for the great thoughts.
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    Lovely


    Kendall Rain30 minutes ago
    its not often you see a poem that flows so lovely about nature. such truth. not everyone sees the beauty of the sun. and much like our sun your poem shines. very nice.
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  • Gold Star - 14,493 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2014 8:36:00 PM)

    Useless exercise..

    that we continue to believe in our thoughts... is such a fallacy


    Rhea D'souza10 minutes ago
    loved the line..and try to sleep like dead....wanting to escape.. beautiful fast pace

  • Gold Star - 14,493 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/21/2014 11:20:00 PM)

    MAGICAL TUNE

    cuckoo sings

    KR BALAKRISHNAN24 minutes ago
    Your poems are like cuckoo songs, so serene, lovely, musical... Bringing peace to hearts. Keep it up please.
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    Very good


    Seema Ali 27 minutes ago
    Your poem talks about the touch of? God in nature excellently.The way you have described the birds is great.Thanks for sharing.Brought a smile to my eyes.
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    Godly beauty for the bird that sings


    Robert Andrews21 minutes ago
    a nice piece about the cuckoo Ive never heard one If you have, read it and your review will be more accurate than mine.

  • Gold Star - 14,493 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/16/2014 6:22:00 PM)

    Many friends...

    Fully agreed with this great poem. Thanks for sharing.


    Partha Sarathi Paul, guskara-burdwan
    Oct 16,2014

  • Gold Star - 14,493 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/2/2014 7:24:00 AM)

    Dream packed drama...

    Sarah Russell Yet, power lives beyond werds... absolutely! ! ! Poet, you Rule.
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  • Gold Star - 14,493 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/30/2014 10:29:00 AM)

    I am happy, , , ,
    By far the best poem


    Daniel FranckLess than a minute ago
    This is the best poem I ever read on this website. It's a nice peice of art work keep up the good work

  • Gold Star - 14,493 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/29/2014 6:13:00 AM)

    Rock star...Shows you care about the world. Other than just yourself.

    Lacie Mark5 hours ago
    Keep writing poems about world changes and politics. It's your thing :)
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    Wonderful

    Virginia R5 hours ago
    Your ending stanza was very strong
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    good poem


    iron maiden fan4 hours ago
    a leader or a rock star what do we need?
    Nice


    Ahmad Al_khatat5 hours ago
    Very crate
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    good


    Jeckle Hyde5 hours ago
    good

  • Gold Star - 14,493 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/28/2014 2:37:00 AM)

    Real wisdom.....
    Love This


    BabyGirl26 minutes ago
    And the poor will enter God's kingdom of riches and be as kings.
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    wow


    Chelsea Hamel29 minutes ago
    You sir are humble and a great poet.
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    Yes Indeed.... Quite Impressive Work! ! ! !


    Michael Donovan27 minutes ago
    Such a nice reading experience has been provided by this formidable piece.
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    well done


    Sai Krishna31 minutes ago
    beautiful

  • Freshman - 1,364 Points Kassem Oude (9/25/2014 9:53:00 AM)

    Hello, I am amazed by this poem and others too as I read all you show, this is a special one. I would hold your hand tightly and shake well. Thank you.

  • Gold Star - 14,493 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/18/2014 9:24:00 PM)

    NO one to question....

    Beautiful


    Zachary Kulkin11 minutes ago
    A true testament to this time and age.
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    good


    Mr. Awesome9 minutes ago
    I like how you expand to analogize the degradement you are speaking of with the entire earth falling apart, and stand for freedom no matter what gets in the way. The only punctuation in the poem is a question mark, which i like. I think the third line has a typo and should say generations.
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    Intriguing

    Jaime Leal10 minutes ago
    Well written poem. A beautifully worded look at the state of nature in today.

I lived not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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