hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 30,345 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 30,345 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/31/2015 8:29:00 PM)

    Get in...
    Thanks a million!
    31 Mar by Ricardo Sexton to Get in

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  • Gold Star - 30,345 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/28/2015 2:32:00 AM)

    Perform fair...

    Respected Hasmukhaji,

    Thanks for the comment.

    Please read Line 4;

    Sky simply smiled at me



    Puttu Kulkarni, Hegde, Kumta, Karnataka - 5813
    Mar 28,2015

  • Gold Star - 30,345 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/27/2015 8:37:00 PM)

    LIVING FORCE...........

    In your following lines resounds the Upanishad's hymn addressed to the God Sun represented by Tagore in his own way~
    At your splendor's brim
    Humans sighted their nobility supreme -
    That from age to age you did compile
    By the Persian gulf or Nile.
    Said they - Sons of the Immortal we are -
    Visioned that Superman
    From beyond the darkness blazing golden
    Your lines resonating above ~
    Flowers appear with typical colors
    As if to show “Yes we are child of rare showers”
    .........................
    ...........................
    We are living force
    Provide to the world real source
    Man with such qualities is welcome
    Who can convert desert into nice for someone!


    Rajat Das Gupta, Kolkata
    Mar 27,2015

  • Gold Star - 30,345 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/23/2015 5:22:00 AM)

    respect
    i read your profile. i realized you are a living legend. i am new to writing, i felt a wave passed through me while reading your achievements. i wonder if i live by your age, will i ever be able to have such achievements to discuss? i admire and respect you for all of your hard work. i am just a first year student at Miranda House college, DU. thank you for sharing your poems, they are thoughtful and awakening.22 Mar

    JIGMET YANGCHAN KATP...

  • Gold Star - 30,345 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/23/2015 5:21:00 AM)

    JIGMET YANGCHAN KATP... respect
    i read your profile. i realized you are a living legend. i am new to writing, i felt a wave passed through me while reading your achievements. i wonder if i live by your age, will i ever be able to have such achievements to discuss? i admire and respect you for all of your hard work. i am just a first year student at Miranda House college, DU. thank you for sharing your poems, they are thoughtful and awakening.
    22 Mar

  • Gold Star - 30,345 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/23/2015 5:19:00 AM)

    lovely woman...Jessica Eloqueent Belsky-El Hasmukh Mehta Your words are lovely and I am humbly honored, that you have taken the time to write me such a rhyme! My soul appreciates yours on levels most cannot imagine! Peace and Blessings to you Always my friend! ! ! (*
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  • Gold Star - 30,345 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/22/2015 3:13:00 AM)

    Real honor

    Inspiring message in a perfect tone. Particularly loved the pigeon thing.
    6 hours ago by Eleanor Poppy Sperry | Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,345 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/18/2015 10:53:00 PM)

    welcome monica sharma
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  • Gold Star - 30,345 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/15/2015 12:39:00 AM)

    Excellent sir. You have nicely said the importance of past history particularly when it is glorious. And the need for revival. The last para is fitting.
    14 Mar by senthil nathan | Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,345 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/15/2015 12:39:00 AM)

    Excellent sir. You have nicely said the importance of past history particularly when it is glorious. And the need for revival. The last para is fitting.
    14 Mar by senthil nathan | Reply

I lived not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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