Ahmad Al_khatat1 hour ago
Very powerful writing
Love and- - - - -Passion- - -Compassion- - - - Fine unique expression- -
Subhashchandra Adhav1 hour ago
The design of the poem is thoughtful, imaginative and unique of its kind- - - - -I liked it much- -
A zealous write of strong message- - - Love, peace, Aman and Amen- - -
An excellent read- - - -
Sandra Boswell1 hour ago
you are obviously a talented poet and despite a couple of lines that i did not understand i think you have written a great poem.Thank you.
Haminia Haar Thank you for your precious comment, dear Hasmukh! I can understand that you don't believe in God, or you would have liked to see God..You are right, nobody could see God in reality. Some people see God in their dreams, others can feel Him, the bible says that God is the creator of all things, beings and human beings. I am one who can feel God and His help for me in reality. Albert Einstein also said that if he didn't believe in God's existence he wouldn't have discovered anything. I believe only in what is present in my life. In my opinion it is better for the people create good things in their mind than to create wars. Where to find God? In our souls!
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alyshia mills23 hours ago
when reading this, you chose the perfect words to paint a picture in my mind. I found that it had strong visionary words. When you talked about color, i saw them. When you talked about her smile, i saw the perfect smile, Very good work!
Lento Maez (Mesa United States; Male; 74)
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
9/5/2014 3: 56: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
MHA, I present you with the highest award for literary excellence in poetry. Stay well and keep on keeping on.
Re: Martial law (Score: 1)
by zbird on Friday, September 05,2014 (20: 40: 22)
this is chilling and frightening and yet something I fear our current government here in the United States is aiming for. There is never a reason for martial law especially here in the States. We are a government of the people, by the people and for the people. Unfortunately as I said our current President seems to have forgotten that and day by day I see us heading into martial law and there seems little we can do about it.
Soldiers are caught in the web of they're authority- more than many just want to be home with said families, so many would not be caught up at all, if given opportunity, the need for protection is understood, but not always who is being protected- Great write
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