Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 342,903 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

All Dreams Not Come True ###309(In 500) - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

All dreams may not come true
All credits due may not accrue
But with true reflection in mind
Ideas newer and newer may emerge and find
though may not be the nature too so kind

Dreaming in day time is not at all good
Good thoughts and efforts work as food
Earnest efforts to come out of wood
Failure may stun and you loose the hope
Still not difficult to walk on tight rope

It is not bad to dream for high sky
Speak always truth and do not lie
You may not have wings to fly
Still nothing wrong to work and try
No need to think or needlessly cry

You must have third sense to rise
All acts should be sensible and wise
Rise and fall is part of the game
Goal and ideas you must frame
No use trying luck or fate to blame

What ever you do must be with resolve?
Take full blame and never try to absolve
Put in best efforts to come out and solve
Full dedication and make everybody to involve
Try to mix with all as soluble dissolve

Despite put in best efforts it may not materialize
Failure may be sure but we may not visualize
All draw backs reasons before us but can't analyze
Complete system may run into trouble and paralyze
Still strive very hard to see the reason and synchronize

Complete days routine and reflections of day's thoughts
In night, thoughts clash and hard won battles are fought
Freedom and joy sincerely thought and brought
Stealing in day time but not easily caught
Simply night dreaming when lying in the cot

Continue to seek solution in dream,
Energy not focused but travel in beam
Try very hard and work as team,
Good efforts in direction but not as power game
Not letting any opportunity with excuses lame

So I find easy way to seek refuge in night
Lie low and have good say without light
more and more attention I try to pay
Always hope to find way in form of ray
washing shores with water at feet of bay.

Life doesn't end with setting of day
Sun may rise again with bright ray
Your hopes may be high and tall
Vast horizon may lie open for all
Try for success without any fall

Come what may be the slogan
Life and opportunities may begun
Nothing to loose with worth attempt
Sometimes you may gain with action prompt

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Comments about All Dreams Not Come True ###309(In 500) by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (4/5/2017 1:53:00 AM)


    Continue to seek solution in dream is an age old saying -a reflection of precept is Brahma sutra, it goes like
    Suchakacha hi sutre, aachaka chahi tat hita./-that means dream clearly indicates a solution, the poet has brilliantly
    fished th eprecept and brought out in a verse which is pure gold counselling for young generations.
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  • (12/26/2016 3:13:00 PM)

    All Dreams Not Come True
    Sir, your poem motivates and inspires to the extent that still not difficult to walk tight rope. Really enjoyed it!
    I invite you to read and comment/rate some of my poetry. Thank you.
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  • Mithilesh Yadav (11/26/2016 12:14:00 PM)


    You may not have wings to fly
    Still nothing wrong to work and try
    No need to think or needlessly cry


    Loved it sirji..... Thanx for sharing
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  • Preston Mwiinga (9/5/2016 3:35:00 PM)


    Here i am commentingb on legends and appreciating their works (Report) Reply

  • Rose Kanana (9/2/2016 12:03:00 PM)


    i like the message...expectations in control

    All acts should be sensible and wise
    Rise and fall is part of the game
    Goal and ideas you must frame
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  • Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek (8/11/2016 10:34:00 PM)


    It is not bad to dream for high sky
    Speak always truth and do not lie
    You may not have wings to fly
    Still nothing wrong to work and try
    No need to think or needlessly cry

    beautiful poem with great wisdom.
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  • Chandini Jaswal (6/28/2016 4:36:00 AM)


    Beautiful piece of poetry sir! I invite you to read my collection of poems and help me improve them with your valuable feedback. (Report) Reply

  • Robert Murray Smith (6/23/2016 5:47:00 PM)


    A great effort. What you write is so true. (Report) Reply

  • Shashikant Nishant Sharma (4/15/2016 10:29:00 PM)


    This is really an inspiring poem. I really appreciate it. Good work. Short and witty. Thanks for sharing. I do appreciate it. Wonderful work done well. Rhyme and rhythm of the poem is superb. (Report) Reply

  • Subhas Chandra Chakra (4/15/2016 3:17:00 AM)


    It is not bad to dream for high sky
    Speak always truth and do not lie
    You may not have wings to fly
    Still nothing wrong to work and try
    No need to think or needlessly cry

    Rise and fall is part of the game
    Goal and ideas you must frame
    No use trying luck or fate to blame

    Life doesn't end with setting of day
    Sun may rise again with bright ray
    Your hopes may be high and tall
    Vast horizon may lie open for all
    Try for success without any fall

    Nothing to loose with worth attempt
    Sometimes you may gain with action prompt
    These are the impressive lines I loved most.
    Nice guidelines for the youth.
    (Report) Reply

  • Ryson Dsouza (2/24/2016 7:16:00 AM)


    Yes! ! very well verse... the ideas... motivation.. and some piece of advice conveyed.. Thanks for sharing... (Report) Reply

  • Uzefa Rashida M.a (2/20/2016 9:55:00 AM)


    a poem that is very inspiring, motivating, encouraging, advising, creating confidence, boosting the faith, teaching how to lead a life, how to strive for success, how to not quit without achieving. A poem that could be our secret to success. Loved it immensely (Report) Reply

  • Ernest Makuakua (2/5/2016 7:29:00 AM)


    Despite put in best efforts it may not materialize
    Failure may be sure but we may not visualize
    All draw backs reasons before us but can't analyze
    Complete system may run into trouble and paralyze
    Still strive very hard to see the reason and synchronize

    Life doesn't end with setting of day
    Sun may rise again with bright ray
    Your hopes may be high and tall
    Vast horizon may lie open for all
    Try for success without any fall

    these two stanzas keeps me thinking even deeper

    thank you for sharing yes some dreams just never come true sometimes you gain after trying
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  • (1/6/2016 5:01:00 AM)


    All dreams may not come true yet one must not stop dreaming. Dreams give rise to new ideas but one must work hard and in a synchronized manner to turn them into reality.One must never compromise with morals to chase dream and accept the result whatever it may be for success and failure are part of life. Great & meaningful message conveyed through the poem, Sir. (Report) Reply

  • Sally Gsh (11/12/2015 4:02:00 AM)


    Good thoughts and efforts work as food! [3
    i love it
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  • Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer (10/20/2015 2:24:00 AM)


    All dreams not come true, superb, good words. (Report) Reply

  • Seema Jayaraman (9/28/2015 11:55:00 AM)


    a highly motivational poem.. good to read and remember whenever we falter (Report) Reply

  • Elizabeth Padillo Olesen (9/9/2015 3:47:00 PM)


    Beautifully said the thoughts and convictions which I do share. Thanks a lot for penning this piece of art. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (8/25/2015 1:46:00 PM)


    What ever you do must be with resolve?
    Take full blame and never try to absolve
    Put in best efforts to come out and solve
    Full dedication and make everybody to involve
    Try to mix with all as soluble dissolve i liked these lines very much.
    no Resignation in life. always work hard with full resolve. Full of positive ideas you are spreading dear Poet. thank you very much.
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  • Bharati Nayak (8/11/2015 9:22:00 PM)


    Full of positive notions the poem is a great write inspiring to work with full dedicated effort, sticking to right path and not to be daunted by failures when it says-
    -Life does not end with setting of a day
    Sun may rise again with bright ray
    Your hopes may be high and tall
    Vast horizon may lie open for all
    Try for success without any fall
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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 25, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, September 19, 2016


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