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Perceived love at first sight,
Provide vigour and might,
Against every odds, path right,
Never out of goal keeping in sight,
Always memorable in life,
Dreaming to make her partner or wife,
Ready to sacrifice anything and show,
Always attracted towards beauty and glow,
Wants to build steady trust and grow,
Ready to swim with the water and flow,
Not to miss any chance and offer,
All wishes for happiness and self suffer,
All consequences frighten and create panic,
Even feet too crumble with melody or music,
Thoughts travel faster than light,
Count the stars at dead night,
At such an age awful experience,
Wedding of all watching at fence,
No more kidding but sincere efforts,
Attending all calls from ship at ports,
Waiting for response immediately to follow,
Oh! but courage and strength will not allow,
Always thinking of steps to show her but how?
Attempts to be made not late but now,
All hopes dashing with the news of engagement,
When see all preparations of marriage and movements,
With heavy heart no love to express,
Some weakness in part ready to redress
hasmukh amathalal
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Abby Keen
(2/11/2010 4:58:00 PM) |
i like this :) its awesome! im a real sucker 4 poems like these
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Suraj Motiwala
(1/19/2010 11:04:00 PM) |
Nice one! :) enjoyed reading it.
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Luna Alam
(10/11/2009 4:35:00 PM) |
beautiful way of conveying the thoughts of your opinion in your write...
thoughts and words and well used...love at firs sight...very clever way of writing..=)
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Philip Winchester
(9/30/2009 5:41:00 AM) |
My first sight on this site of 'At First Sight' leaves me my friend with pure delight
of the things you write.To Judge with all my might with my Poetic Right, To call you 'Friend'
My kind regards perhaps you may see a charm in anothers Prose.
Philip
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Jazza Bella
(9/22/2009 1:52:00 PM) |
I really enjoyed this piece thank you
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Sachin Goswami
(9/12/2009 11:25:00 AM) |
Perceived love at first sight,
Provide vigour and might,
Against every odds, path right, ...10
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Sagarika Shah
(9/7/2009 7:38:00 AM) |
Always memorable in life,
Dreaming to make her partner or wife, ...10
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