hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 65,325 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

A Place Called - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

place called “home” is to feel homely,
God’s creation standing by to look so lovely,
May be she is with all her elegance,
Everything for sure and no pretence,

Gently spoken words I hear,
Sounds like music in my ear,
Shivering cold run in spine,
As if showing drunken state caused by wine,

Mild walk around give melancholy voice,
She is with me not becasuse of her choice,
Always standing by and rendering advice,
Suggesting the ways with utmost care to improvise,

Bowing head with all weight on my solder and lean,
Air to suggest fragrance and house almost neat and clean
“Life is so suggestive and perfect” does that mean?
It seems half battle is over with clear perfect win,

Home loses significance if she is not there?
Without her no refuge and to go nowhere,
Ideal place i shome to step in with peace of mind,
Smiling at door to receive with gesture kind

All care is taken of with ease and no tension,
Home in perfect condition and look as Manson,
No clash of views even with slight reason,
All days alike whether season or no season,

With arrival of spring, flowers boom,
All happiness in home and I always zoom,
housing of toys all in single room,
joy and only joy with trace of gloom,

“Home” is an end of universe,
Does not come as surprise and need to rehearse,
It is place where even HE may prefer to stay,
Heaven here, hell here, we need only to create the way


Comments about A Place Called by hasmukh amathalal

  • Rookie Twisted Strange (3/28/2010 8:32:00 PM)

    This is a very deep beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 284 Points Bethany Williams (3/20/2010 9:06:00 PM)

    Such beauty in a great poem. Great words used in this poem.. I had such a great time reading this....10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (1/29/2010 10:00:00 PM)

    A 10++ for sure. A beautiful write about the place where we find happiness and solace! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 116 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (1/25/2010 10:20:00 AM)

    i am the 100th person to rate this one... i gave it a 10... it's so good. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lean Punio (1/2/2010 2:03:00 AM)

    a home is a place that you will find love and care...
    respect and peace are there when i go home...
    i'm going home now co'z i found the emptiness when i'm alone
    every single minutes my home keeps waiting for me to go back! ! !
    beautiful poem! ! !
    I'm going home! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gul naz (12/19/2009 1:45:00 PM)

    a fact no one can deny............10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Liz Annson (12/13/2009 11:00:00 PM)

    a place called house is where we stay
    a place called home is what we make
    thank you for sharing this with us... a beautiful poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 27 Points Sahar Sahar (12/6/2009 2:44:00 AM)

    A beautifuly described structure of home and its atmosphere, we dwell, with our life, ....with all serene and tranquil breaths....... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Maria Shipka (12/4/2009 5:52:00 AM)

    the worst on PoemHunter is that the steals the comments and then a man must again write once again... so I liked thod you poem much! I felt as of it breathes the LOVE&PEAVE&HAPPINESS...and I wish you it of all my heart :)
    Thank you for sharing and +10 is yours :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 193 Points Lee Somerville (11/30/2009 8:41:00 AM)

    Well written! ! ! A 10++ for sure. Thanks for sharing it! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,034 Points Louis Rams (11/8/2009 6:15:00 PM)

    like the song says 'a house is not a home when there's no one there'
    good write! a ten (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 116 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (11/7/2009 8:40:00 AM)

    it seems that hundreds have already rated and commented this poem and all of them gives this one a thumb up. I think it deserves it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nathanial Jones (11/4/2009 9:25:00 AM)

    A well structured poem.. a place you can really call home. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 521 Points Subbaraman N V (11/2/2009 11:25:00 PM)

    Yes; that indeed is a home! What a fine crafting! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,396 Points Ken E Hall (11/2/2009 6:50:00 PM)

    Home is the core of our being and your poem spells it out pefectly,
    every little thing in it is part of us our history -nice thoughts through out
    God's creation ++++++++++++10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Clara Odelia Ciutara (11/1/2009 3:13:00 AM)

    “Home” is an end of universe,
    Does not come as surprise and need to rehearse,
    It is place where even HE may prefer to stay,
    Heaven here, hell here, we need only to create the way

    Nicely written, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 30 Points Sreejith Kulaparambil (10/24/2009 7:10:00 AM)

    really beautiful poem....! ! 10 points.. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 813 Points Antonio Liao (10/22/2009 9:51:00 PM)

    a timely poem for global warming.....excellent view of what life
    meant to be in touch....with what we call it Home... great as the
    vision of God, a place where nothing worries our fear not; for not
    even the angel, would dare to listen to our gnashing teeth... a paradise
    Poem of this century...thank you for sharing God bless....a 10 ++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Njabulo Mkandla (10/20/2009 4:56:00 PM)

    messege heard loud and clear. i'm still trying to get with your half finished way writing. i assume it make your messege more direct and in your face, yet also asking you look further to find completion. i would love to hear what you have to say about my comment. you can dropp me a messege (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raven Bishop (10/17/2009 11:31:00 PM)

    The essence of home should be embraced with warmth.
    I loved this message clear and outloud. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 4, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, June 20, 2011


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