a darling of me
came with tears in eyes
white tears as snow
o baby i said
what's the matter
she never replied
but then stood, sat
and did lie
it's my eyes
burn with pain
she sighed
o my lover
only a look i passed
and only a drop
touched her eyes
removing all the burn
and the pain as well
and this is the why
because the darling
was a paper
and that drop
was a drop
of poetry.
A magnificent poem, written by a magnificent poet, very well done.. Thanks for sharing ^_^
Dear Ahmed Kahled as usual all your poems inspired me.I can't comment with short comment and go.Every time i stop like some one look, yes look not read.Like some one look to a painting some time be so close another time be a little bit away.Or a musician playing a new melody, he play many times till he get to the point.I look in my mind, read and read till the first dropp of my brianchild birht.Drop after dropp all pool in one page. Here's my pool's drops: Drops of water, Drops of thought When eyes of sky rain Each dropp has an angel Carry the dropp some where Each dropp has a special fate When head of sky birth Each brainchild has an angel Carry the dropp to a brain One dropp to write another on to paint Each dropp has a special fate All what we need is just to pray My dear Khaled thanks again i hope to accept to post my pool's drops to my page.
Beautiful.Emancipation of unrequited love.Love sometimes seeks oneness in love only.Due to some reasons may be love ends its incriminating bliss.Then is not actually true love.Its calculation.But this poem added flavour to the tea of loss and well appreciated by people who has experienced broken hearts, tears and tissue papers or napkins to throw it away as some bad dreams before or something worthy to be forgotten.
Thank you, one of most beautiful drops I've ever seen! Love it, thank you,10.
You make me want to discover a lot in poetry, i am so going to read more of your work
Your poetry just gets better, Always makes the reader think, This makes the poem have more impact. Truly a great write.
My comment entitled 'The Love Confession from Ahmed's Heart' a reply for your work -Describing how passionate you are in literature :) LOL hope you like it Ahmed, i just wrote and it sounds like poem isnt hhahaha so if it look weird poem ignore this, hahahaha 'The Love Confession from Ahmed's Heart' Drip Drop of your tears The Confession of love Saturated feeling soluble emotions In tears, So salty As they tell deepest reality Of love, In Ahmed's poetry The Confession His love, His soul Flow tears to write a letter On secret love paper Magical tears will left other words smears Only his thought absorbed To feel his sensation All the loves in his hand Of a sad, happy and beauty To live in love with poetry forever One day i know, Ahmed will stop cry and tears will dry but saltiness still tasted on the secret paper To witness of his confession, A deepest way to tell that he is the poetry lover_Unwritten Soul
I like this style of poetry sometimes I being familiar with......this's a wonderful poem... The dropp of poetry consecutively comprise in a sea of poetry....great poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A dropp of poetry. What could ever flow more freely than creativity? Beautiful writing, brother.