A Green Poem In Jerusalem Poem by ahmed khaled

A Green Poem In Jerusalem

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in the beginning..
it was a colour,
a colour decided to be a poem
and it was.
so fresh and green,
as green as olive trees..
shining in jerusalem,
scattering peace and wishes..
as sacred pearls,
to all lovers and pilgrims
i saw that poem..
in a green voice..
coming from light remains,
by the right place of tur mountain
as it was sung by saints and angels
and manifested by the holy spirit, ..
who wrote it's title,
before the dawn does plant..
the dancing of wishes,
to be forever..
'a green poem..
..in jerusalem'.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 21 December 2011

Beautiful as always. Your poems always Bring colour to the world. A great write.

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Jacqui Broad 22 December 2011

Ahmed, I think an angel sits on your shoulder and whispers sweet words of beauty in your ear. Peace for Jerusalem! Green pastures of love, where there's no more war. Then Jesus can return, riding on a donkey, and people greeting Him with green leaves of palmtrees. Beautiful poem...

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Vipins Puthooran 24 December 2011

A beautiful poem! ! May be sung by an archangel))))

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Joses Tirtabudi 28 December 2011

Great poem. Great picture language.

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Alicia Meyers 28 December 2011

Beautiful poem. (: I loved it(:

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Josephine Collett 13 November 2014

beautiful sense of freshness and vitality, excellent imagery. really enjoy your poetry Ahmed.

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Margaret Beil 07 January 2012

Balance, harmony and nature, forever green! Thanks for the share. I invite you to comment on my poem We Can Be Raindrops :)

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Rajendran Muthiah 03 January 2012

From the comments of Almedia Knight Oliver and Jacqui Broad, I presume that many a symbol beautify this poem. A chain of symbolic lines connects the poem as whole.

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Craig Mize 31 December 2011

All that I can say is that was beautiful and thank you for sharing

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David Gerardino 31 December 2011

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