Be A Dream Poem by ahmed khaled

Be A Dream

Rating: 4.9


tell the wave...
not to burn
tell the fire...
not to wet
and tell the flower...
/// be a dream ///

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Benjamin Paa Willie 29 December 2011

That is a really good. I will re-read it tomorrow, sure.

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blue serene 29 December 2011

it is so nice. it conveys lots of thoughts here. nice work. u really are a great poet. :)

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Hans Vr 30 December 2011

Very poetic call for authenticity. A very nice poem, Ahmed Original and a pleasure to read

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Vipins Puthooran 02 January 2012

Excellent poetic fantasy/ 10

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Lyllie Menjivar 02 January 2012

Very strong meanings, and its a very unique poem indeed.- DarkX474

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Soul Watcher 13 November 2014

كلمات بالرغم من قصرها ولكنها تحميل معاني جميلة خلفها شكرا على المشاركة

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 15 February 2012

nice poem.......short and deep....very deep....keep it up check out my poem 2b or not 2b.....thanks for sharing

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Emily Gasperak 08 January 2012

Your poem is very nicely written! Great job! !

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Bella Hernandez 04 January 2012

beautiful and short 'n elegant many meaning one that i can see is to be yourself! and all of the things to do is to Dream! ! ! ~Bella

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Shadrach Knight 04 January 2012

Thanks for showing me this, It was wonderful.

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